Young Writers Society

Tell me, who's the one you love?

Tell me now before I go to war

Just let me know for sure

Just tell me I really like the begining, it hooked me right from the start.



Is my love enough?

Is my love enough for you

Or will you pick and choose?

Tell me "Is my love enough-pick and choose" I like those two sentances a lot, very nice.



We only have so long before the time will come

So you just kiss me now and forget about what we'll become I like these two sentances even more. And I actually like how you seperated these into their own mini paragraph.



Tell me, what you want me to do

Do you want me to go right now

And leave you here to drown?

Oh, Tell me "leave you here to drown" I liked that a lot, too, definatly a keeper.



We are two in a few

Give me a quick kiss goodbye

And then I'll go and die

Tell me "Kiss me goodbye and the I'll go and die" awwww very sweet. I like the ending sososo much! It was a great ending to an amazing song. Bravo!