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Chapter One
The blood red sky danced off the twinkling white snow. The light dulled to a pale orange, as the sun disappeared beneath the huge grey mountains.
Soon the full grey moon slid into view with the pinprick stars lighting up the night with a pale silvery light.
The journey continued on, long and endless, it was deathly still and the silence was unbearable. Only the occasional cough or sneeze filled in the emptiness of the closed in train.
The light flickered out and left them sitting in the dark, feeling around for lost belonging that fell to the wooden floor when a fellow train rode beside them, tossing people from their seats.
Erica's pale white skin contrasted with her midnight black hair that tumbled below her shoulders in a plait. Her eyes shined a deep purple that looked almost black in the dark as she gazed out of the window, willing the train to hurry up and do what it was destined to, it was only a matter of time before they figured out her secret.
Erica sighed and wound down the window for a better look at the sky. The cool air washed against her face as she examined the way the moon hung in the sky. She had ten more minutes until it happened, oh why did I come early? She could already feel the casualties weigh up as each second ticked by.
Erica glanced mercifully around the carriage, taking in every face, noticing the way they ignorantly did not see what would scar their memories forever.
A baby lay on its mother’s lap, its gentle breathing only a slight sound in a carriage full of business men in dark suits with unused laptops on their knees. Their heads rolled to the side with exhaustion, rumbling snores echoing about the walls.
I used to keep count she thought, now I only remember the frustrating ones that fight for life. Clinging to a slipping surface, clawing at the surface of reality but I know that it cannot last for they must die and I must take them. They cannot change what is destined of them.
Her senses increased; suddenly she was aware of the movements in the carriage. The mother was the first to realize what was happening as she pushed her baby to her chest protecting it from the lurch as the train hit the wonky track, the business man’s gasp as he fell from his seat, a teenage girl as she grasped her boyfriend’s hand, telling him she would never let go.
“You must let go,” Erica whispered in her ear, “Tom would want you to be at peace” Erica extended her long skeletal hand beckoning her to join them in the world after the living. She watched as the silly girl grasped her hand, her pale spirit rising out of her body as it smashed against the wall, crimson fluid dripping out of a gaping wound in her head.
“Good girl,” She cooed, walking down the aisle of the train with Hannah following behind, much like an obedient puppy, if puppies moved when they died that is.
“Am I-am I dead?” Hannah asked, her voice an almost squeak, shock now wearing off leaving her with the consequence of what was really happening.
“Shhhh,” Erica hushed harshly, “I hear something” The sound she most detested now wrung loud in her ears, a clawing sound one invisible to human ears but very much heard in hers.
“Dammit!” She cursed, speculating why she had to endure such a task. Why could one of the others not do it? Why me? This is so unfair. But life was unfair, even after death it was still unfair, but that was what you got, being a collector, you always had to deal with unfairness whether it was a young child being run over by a train, his screams echoing across the station not knowing no one could help him, while a mass murderer ran free of your grasp, just as you felt him on the tips of your fingers and experienced the tingling up your spine as you thought over what death you shall put him through for ending all the innocent lives he took for his own, sick pleasure, or when thinking you can finally relax, you would land a job collecting the bodies of a stray bomb or plane crash. But you would always have to push through because there was always someone worse off than yourself, for one the girl Hannah as she trailed behind Erica still the raw pain of her own death tugged at her throat and she knew Hannah’s pain as she watched her boyfriend die so similar to Erica, yet so different.
Erica turned to face Hannah. I wonder if she hates the sound of death as much as me?
“Look, go greet your boyfriend into death just take his hand and lead him over here then I will tell you what to do next, okay?” She nodded slightly and walked off towards her boyfriend’s tattered body. She flinched as she took his blood stained hand.
“Honey, come with me it will be okay,” Her voice wobbled as silent tears streamed down her face, “Do I have to take him?” She turned to Erica wanting to hear an answer that could not be told.
“You can’t if you want to, make him suffer his death alone, make him become all alone and lonely!” Her voice laced with anger was rising by the second.
The blade glinted in the torchlight the fatal weapon that had taken so many lives. The stinging started, and then rose brutally until it seems her leg was on fire.
“Stop! Stop please, just kill me I don’t-I don’t want” Her voice was cut off as she saw the Steven’s frightened face, staring into her eyes. He had known what was coming; they all had it coming eventually.
Bodies were cowering in the corners of the building trying to shut out her screams of pain she was not aware of making.
“I’m sorry Steven, I thought-I thought” She felt the blade sear across her throat as her body stopped its writhing at the dying sound of a siren in the distance.
Erica spirit raised out of her broken body, the scene now taking place beneath her.
“Steven,” She called out to him, trying to grasp his hand, but it passed through like she had tried to catch air,. “What’s happening? Steven! Steven!”
The police were now swarming around the place in a flurry of blue and red until they stopped wide eyed, looking at her body. Alone, broken and murdered.
“Erica? Erica?” Erica turned to look at Hannah. Her boyfriend was now trailing behind her a look of wonderment on his face, probably still confused about what happened.
“My work is done now, we must leave” Other deceased collectors were now appearing in the train. “Hannah, Tom, come with me”
Erica disappeared, and one by one the others followed.
*
“Erica, what is this place?” Hannah marvelled as she paced the foyer, her eyes looked as though they might off popped out of her head as she tried to look in all directions at once.
“This is the foyer of the underworld,” Erica explained, she had been here a million times, but the splendour had never refused to amaze her. The giant cave walls towered over them, the dark brown dirt was covered with intricate paintings of cloaked figures masked the wall, the figure held a razor-sharp scythe that arched above its head, a wasted hand visible from under the cloak. This man was Death.
Tom had moved to inspect a painting closer, while Hannah stared open mouthed at the glistening chandelier that hung from the ceiling, the candles lighting up the darkness with a soft red glow.
“Excuse me young man” Came the coarse voice of Mrs Maggonary, she had been the receptionist for Death for as long as Erica remembered. Mrs Maggonary was a thin, elderly woman who didn’t seem to look like she had seen the light of day; her skin was so pale and thin that you could see the beginning of blue veins showing through, her hair fell over her shoulders in a wild mass of grey and her eyes were as sharp as a hawks, you had better be afraid if you put a toe out of line with this woman. “Don’t touch that!” Tom’s finger was but an inch away when Mrs Maggonary voice called out shrill as ever; Erica could see she was preparing for a lecture.
“Please ma’am, I need to take these two,” She gestured to Hannah and Tom, “To meet Death, they need to learn their...duties as such”
“I’ll take them,” Mrs Maggonary said bustling towards the door, but just before she entered she turned her lamp like gaze over Erica, “I’d keep to myself missy, I am starting to wonder whether we can trust you with the new arrivals”
Hannah gave Erica a weak smile before following Mrs Maggonary out the door, her face reading only too clearly the queasiness she was feeling towards meeting the fearsome man she had heard so many tales about.
Erica sat down on the black leather couch that sat in the corner of the room and watched as collectors came and went with their new arrivals. What is taking them so long? Just as that thought crossed her mind the door creaked and Hannah worried face peered out, it lightened slightly seeing Erica sitting on the couch. She hadn’t abandoned her.
“Where is Tom?” Erica was truly confused; never when two new arrivals came together did they get separated so quickly without warning.
“Death said that he wanted to talk to Tom alone for a while, you don’t think that he’ll take him to the underworld do you?” Erica shook her head bewildered; she didn’t see any reason why, unless of course he had done something bad, no, no bad deeds then that must mean that, a shiver passed down Erica’s spine. Death must want something from him.
“Hannah we must go, it’s been too long” Hannah was still in denial, but it was time for her to face the facts. “Hannah, if I know Death,” Erica looked deep into Hannah’s eyes “Then he must have something important for him to do”
“But it’s not fair Erica, what happened to forever being with your loved ones after death?” Hannah sobbed as she shrank to the dirt floor.
“Nothing is fair” Erica tugged at Hannah making her stand up, all feelings of affection vanished in the blink of an eye. Erica strode to the far wall. “Well are you coming?” Hannah followed suit, puzzled over why Erica was acting so harshly. Erica pressed her hands against the wall and muttered some words under breath.
The wall seems to vanish and revealed the long winding tunnels that led into the underground.
“But can’t we just...” Hannah voice was cut off by the sharp reply of Erica.
“No, you will get too lazy, we walk”
The silence was beginning to get uncomfortable, Hannah’s confused and hurt face made Erica start to feel guilty for snapping at her yet she was too proud to apologize.
“Erica, where exactly are we going?” Hannah glanced nervously at the ceiling that seems to go up for miles before revealing a speck of light at the top.
“Turn here,” Erica turned into another winding passage, nodding mutely to collectors who were passing by. “We are going to the chambers, there,” She paused to look at her watch, “You will decide whether you want to stay with your guardian, me, or go off on your own”
Erica could not sleep; she tossed and turned in her bed trying to get comfortable.
Oh sod it! She climbed out of bed, immediately feeling the chill of the night air around her that almost made her get back into the warm covers she had now left.
Erica felt the wall down the steps being careful not to make a sound that would wake the sleeping collectors.
“Hannah!” She pulled her dressing gown tightly around her startled when she saw Hannah sitting by the hard-packed dirt fireplace the fire burning brightly, making Hannah’s blonde hair shine and her bloodshot eyes glimmer. It was clear she had been crying.
“I’ve decided Erica,” Hannah was looking deep into the flames, “I’m going to stay with you, I don’t know the ropes as well as you do around here. I’m-I’m not sure what I would do without you to help me.”
Erica put her hand on Hannah’s arm, “You know what? I used to have a fiancé, Steven was his name.”
“Really, what happened?” Hannah shifted herself to face Erica.
“Well he and I got kidnapped by a rebel group called the ‘Crimson Chaos’ and when my mother alerted the police about me after she got a ransom tape, they slit my throat,” She ignored the look of horror on Hannah’s face. “Then of course they had to desert there hide out not having enough time to bury my body they left it there to rot, I wasn’t met by a guardian, I have no idea why,” Erica sighed reliving the memories again, “Steven was later murdered, I never saw him again, I later learned that Death had taken him for ‘classified reasons’, I never stopped loving him you know, even after all these years without him”
“I’m sorry, I never-“Hannah started.
“Don’t worry; just don’t give up hope okay? You’ll see him one day. We just need to have faith”
They sat in comfortable silence for the rest of the night neither realized when they dozed off in their armchairs. All ill feelings removed and the promise of a new dawn on the horizon.
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