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Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:21 am
Daisy131Spoink says...



Masquerade Brothers

Dear Reader of this Message,

I would like to invite you to a masquerade ball my brothers and I are hosting.
As our father has recently passed away and we have been left with his wealth and glorious mansion. As a result of this my brothes and I would feel so selfish if we didn't place it to good use.

As our goodbye to our father, we would like to host a ball in his honour. Where all the people of Tisdale shall be invited to come and join us on this wonderful day for merriment at Masquerade Manor.

As all Masquearade balls follow, it would be very nice if you all placed on your best frocks and masks and left your identities behind you for the evening.


Yours Sincerely,

The Masquerade Brothers.


Rules

1. Swearing isn't permitted. Though, I believe I'll rephrase that. Swearing is permitted though on a minor scale.
2. Romance is allowed, though, It cannot be vivid. Also very very VIVID fighting scenes. Who doesn't like a good fight.
3.Girl to boy ratio must be even. Not seven girls and the one guy.
4.God-modding isn't allowed. Your characters can't be to perfect, but in saything they can't be boring either.


Plot:
From far and wide citizens of Tisdale have received a letter inviting them to the Masquerade Manor to dine with the brothers in their mournful loss. Though what the guests do not know is that the Masquerade Brothers do not want merriment for others, they want it for themselves.

All guests are hurtled into a race for their lives as one by one the Masquerade brothers hunt down their guests and slaughter them. Every minute a guest dies leaving only group people to find.

You are one of the group people to have survived the Brothers game so far. Time is ticking and you have to find an exit before you are slaughtered in the brothers hold.

Though what you don't know it is the brothers who are doing the killing. As everyone hides their faces behind masks the brothes also do. The death crows, as they call their masks are the last thing you see till you are entering the here after.

There is only one escape but only the brothers know where that is but to find a brother is to find your own death...

Setting:

Masquerade Manor
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Masquerade Manor origniated in the 1800's, where a rich man bought the house from a blind woman who couldn't see the value of her house her father left for her. Most people believed, the current owners cheated the house of the poor women.

Though the brothers think differently, this is definietly the case. It is the most beautiful house in Tisdale, and is often the barter of conversations.

Tisdale:
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Tisdale is place where most people believe to be the most beautiful sights in England. It is rather small yet quaint and people like to come here on holidays. With a long rive breaking the town into two. A small boat company lends it boats and drivers out for the passing.



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Up for love:
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Last edited by Daisy131Spoink on Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:01 am, edited 3 times in total.
  





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Tue Feb 16, 2010 3:54 pm
irishfire says...



Hey!! I'm in!

Name: Scarlett "Mason" Masonaric
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Personality: Witty and blunt when she feels like it, as well as clever. Shes very forward about certain things but finds humor in most situations.

Appearence: http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_image ... _full.jpeg

Mask and clothing:

Mask -
http://images.buycostumes.com/mgen/merc ... /11140.jpg

Clothing -
http://img.alibaba.com/photo/10665040/E ... _Black.jpg

Hates: Being interupted and tricked.
Likes: Solving a problem and showing her skills

Strengths: She was taught to know how to fight with a sword and began very good at it, and keeps one at her side at all times, even if no one can see it.

Up for love: Yup!

Other: Up for friendship too!

*is wicked excited for this one*
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Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:52 pm
Kaywiia says...



Name: Daylene Renalde

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Personality: A very kind, but clever girl. She has a lot of wit, and uses it very often, expecially with men who think girls are stupid. She also makes great elaborate plans.

Appearance:
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Mask and clothng:
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Hates: Dogs, stupid people, boys who thinks she's dumb.

Likes: Cats, roses, nice boys.

Habits: Twirling her hair.

Strengths: Coming up with plans, witty comments.

Up for love: YES YES AND YES

Other: terrible at hand to hand combat. if it comes to that she takes off her shoes and beats her attacker with the point of her heels.
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Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:38 pm
Sarah Pass says...



name:Francesca Young
Gender:Female
Personality:Lively,very cunning,mysterious,intuitive
Appearance and clothing:pg3.html&size=84k&name=pic+prom+dresses...&p=prom+dresses&oid=c44d471dbc25ac84&fr2=&no=57&tt=485096&b=41&ni=20&sigr=11k8lr7vr&sigi=11qgqtor5&sigb=126r9no07
Mask:http://www.windycitynovelties.com/6824p/assorted-feather-masks.html?s_cid=bec6824 the green and black one
Hates:cliques,catty girls,and mean and stupid boys
Likes:Dancing, and parties
Habits:Laughing constantly
Strengths:Figuring out who a person really is
Up for love:Sure,but nothing too serious
Others:Great runner and trained in boxing
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Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:40 pm
Jas says...



Name: Courtney Everworth

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Personality: Very weird, tends to blurt out random facts about things at the most untimely moments, like at her mother's funeral she'll tell the mourning that Maine has no poisnoness snakes due to scientific testing. She is really nice and loyal when you get to know her but other than that she's just weird. Think Luna Lovegood. It's a miracle she survived so long.

Appearance: Very dark brown hair, dark brown eyes, pretty but plain looking.

Mask and clothng: will put up later

Hates: Snobs, people who backstab and obviously the Masquerade brothers for the murder they have done

Likes: being with close friends, peace, love

Habits: bites fingers when nervous, stares at a blank space or puts on a poker face when scared or embarassed

Strengths: she can't fight hand to hand but can hide really well and can set amazing traps.

Up for love: umm...she's being pursued by murderers out for her blood, I think romance is not an option here unless he's going to live save her life or really tries!

Other:
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:27 pm
Midsummer'sQueen says...



Am I allowed to be one of the brothers?
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Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:37 pm
Sins says...



This looks good! I'm in!
I'll be a guy, considering there aren't any so far :wink:


Name: Aston Prickard

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Personality: Aston is a selfish, uncaring guy. All he thinks, and cares about, is himself. He is a very attractive guy so he uses this to his advantage when it comes to girls. When he meets a pretty girl, he will make her feel special and important. What they don't realise is that he says that stuff to every other girl he knows. Even though Aston is cocky, he can be kind when he lets his true feelings get the better of him. He hates showing his true feelings, he doesn't want people to trust him. Because of this, him acting kindly doesn't happen often.

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That's the most boyish one I could find... :lol:

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Hates: People that can do things better than him, failing, being proved wrong.

Likes: Showing off, girls, doing something well, flirting

Habits: Tapping his fingers on something near him

Strengths: Good looking, funny, comes up with very good plans, extremely good liar

Up for love: Yeah, for whoever can handle him

Other: When Aston gets close to a person, he becomes very protective over them.
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Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:19 pm
ScarlettFire says...



Darn. I was tempted to join and determined not to. I guess I'm in then. I'll be back with a profile later.
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Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:28 pm
Daisy131Spoink says...



I made this ages ago...but if you want to start it up again then okay. Midsummer you can be one of the brothers.
  





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Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:53 pm
ToritheMonster says...



May I be one too? Here, I'll make a profile, but I'll delete it if you don't want me to have one, eh? Thanks.
Honey, you should see me in a crown.
  





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Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:56 pm
Daisy131Spoink says...



You can join Dreamy!
  





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Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:10 pm
ToritheMonster says...



Name: Thomas Masquerade
Age: 23
Gender:male
Personality:A seemingly charming and enchanting demeanor masks a thirst for blood and death.
Appearance:
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Mask and clothng:
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Hates:life, people other than him and his brothers, bright colors.
Likes:blood, death, women, killing, crows, the color black.
Habits:has a bad habit of talking to himself
Strengths:fighting, killing, fast with a knife, a smooth talker.
Up for love: erm... well, he'll kill you, but I suppose...
Other:
Honey, you should see me in a crown.
  





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Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:42 pm
Daisy131Spoink says...



Name:Matthew "Matt" Wilston

Age:21

Gender:Male

Personality:Fiery, and often brash Matt is a very outgoing person though rather rough. He doesn't take care of where he stands, and usually only cares for himself. He thikns rather highly of himself, though, still has a caring insight on him.

Appearance:
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Clothing: (Ignore the guy, just look at the suit.)
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Hates: He can't stand dancing, or being helpless. He always likes the feeling of helping people, though his personality often contradicts him.

Likes:Girls. Matt is a massive ladies man and isn't afraid to flaunt himself.

Habits:When nervous of thinking he'll play with his hair and narrow his eyes.

Strengths: He is strong, fast and agile. He can think rather quickly on the spot though his emotions play to wildly in front of him.

Up for love:Yes.

** I might make a sister character later.
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Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:45 pm
kidashka says...



Can I be your sister, Daisy? :D
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Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:21 pm
ScarlettFire says...



Here's my profile. I'll finish this later.

Name: Cassia Winters.
Age: 18.
Gender: Female.
Personality: Cassia is almost always seen as cruel but it's just a mask. She's actually really nice and caring. She'll do anything to protect those she cares for or loves but she gets scared easily..
Appearance:
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Hates: Darkness, confined spaces and violence.
Likes: Light, open, airy spaces and kindness.
Habits: Bites her lip when nervous.
Strengths: Cassia can be really brave on rare occasions.
Up for love: Yes.
Other: She has a small pocket knife tucked into her bodice. Cassia is the daughter of an Earl, though no one knows this. (Hope this is okay...)
Last edited by ScarlettFire on Sat Apr 24, 2010 6:28 am, edited 2 times in total.
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