Hey everyone. This is my first poem - posted on here - and really, I'm not that much of a poem writer. But I love poems, love reading them, and hearing them... so I thought I'd try my hand at writing one. Hopefully I didn't bomb it, but I would appreciate ALL your comments. If the poems sucks, tell me so! Oh, and I'm not sure about poems and their grammar, so feel free to tear that subject apart, too. Thanks so much!
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Dear Parental Figures,
And why do I cry,
When I pretend to hear your voices?
Why do I bother to sob,
Every time I try and pictures your faces?
For you left me,
Cast me aside,
Turned away,
And abandoned all hope.
And for what?
NOTHING.
Nothing Is what I mean to you;
Nothing are the memories of us.
We had nothing,
No anything.
Never did,
And I’m afraid,
We never will.
We shared nothing in common.
Stil don’t;
No face,
Nor the love.
I even refuse to admit we’re blood.
But that makes you happy,
..You lying, ungrateful…
You know,
I promise not to be like you.
I won’t even end up like you.
I refuse to turn into the likes of…
You
For you hate me,
And I, you.
Because,
I’m nothing to you.
Never was.
Never am.
And I’ll hold it you,
For you to keep being…
Forever and endlessly,
Nothing to me.
Hate,
Your Little Girl
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