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and eat us for dinner
hand on you. I’ll make sure of it.”
Sara watched a frog stuck his tongue far out to catch a fly, something she’d seen on TV.
“Come on.[replace with a comma]” Janie whispered and started heading toward the cabin
Sara turned her head toward Janie and blinked in a way that she had just been under hypnosis
“Sara, let’s go home. We saw his house that’s good enough. I bet nobody’s ever even gotten this far, not even stupid Jimmy Windmen.”
Sara turned her head toward Janie and blinked in a way that she had just been under hypnosis.
“No, let’s continue, No point in turning back now.”
Janie had to hand it to Sara. She may be the sweetest and shyest person she knew, but she could really be brave when she wanted to be.
When she was sure they were safe[add in a comma] Janie crept forward first and went up to the porch to a window to look inside.
The girls kept their heads just below the ledge,[s] again just [/s]incase the man inside had heard them coming up the stairs and was looking out to see what it was
She didn’t want to be the reason they got caught,[full stop] Silently, Sara [s]she silently [/s]looked up to Janie for being so brave, and knew that if they did get caught Janie would do anything to protect her
Not that she would know, [s]she was [/s] being an only child
Sara put her head up to see inside. She noticed it didn’t look much like a cabin, more like a really nice house. Not at all like she had imagined. It even looked a little; well she couldn’t say fancy because it didn’t look like the home of someone who spent their money on their house the way Joanna Johnson’s mom did. But it was very nice in a way that made you think fancy.
Sara was jerked out of her analysis of the house when she heard footsteps
Both girls jumped as they heard a dog in the back yard start barking and clanging against his kennel. The girls watched as the man grabbed a bag of dog food from the pantry and went out the back door. They listened as he pored the food into a metal dish
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