Young Writers Society

You wallow around in Homework Help,
Waiting for someone to give a yelp.
You shake off the mud and curl your tail,
Leaving behind a math-laden trail.

You sweep down and fix the headaches caused
By pre-algebra woes and biology fogs.
Physics and chemistry, you cover it all.
On our way to an F, you've broken our fall.

We miss you a lot in Homework Help,
But it's time for you to be put on the shelf.

~Rosey

You wallow around in Homework Help,
Waiting for someone to give a yelp.
You shake off the mud and curl your tail,
Leaving behind a math-laden trail.

You sweep down and fix the headaches caused,
By pre-algebra woes and biology [s]spells.[/s]fogs I know it doesn't rhyme, but I think it sounds a tad bit better
Physics and chemistry, you cover it all,
On our way to an F, you've broken our fall.

We miss you a lot in Homework Help,
But it's time for you to be put on the shelf.

~Rosey

awwwww!!!!! that was SO sweet! Snoink will love it!!!!!

haha haha
nicely done.

Rosey Unicorn wrote:You wallow around in Homework Help,
Waiting for someone to give a yelp.
You shake off the mud and curl your tail,
Leaving behind a math-laden trail.

You sweep down and fix the headaches caused, You don't need this comma.
By pre-algebra woes and biology spells. Gasp! This doesn't rhyme, but I agree with tori: fogs would be a nice slant ryme.
Physics and chemistry, you cover it all, This comma should be a period.
On our way to an F, you've broken our fall.

We miss you a lot in Homework Help,
But it's time for you to be put on the shelf.

~Rosey

Yeah, Snoink'll love this. Nice job Rosey.

Edited.

Thanks for the comments!

It's lovely Rosey!

You did a wonderful job. Snoink will love this. It's short, sweet and shows how much Snoink helped everyone on here. Excellent job!

Happy Writing!

Meadow

Didn't realize Snoink was a book.

A reminder that poetry fandom is fine, but comments should also have some sort of critiquing done in them.