The Ghost Writer
I've never liked Monday mornings. The start of school, the start of work, people bustling about the streets, out in force to ruin my day. It was a Monday morning that started this: long afternoons skulking in the back corner of a deserted, back-street café. I could say it was the phone call that sweltering summer day when the clothes were drying on the line and I'd just come inside, sweat dripping down my brow, black hair tied back in a pony-tail and my brother expected for lunch. But I don't suppose it was. Monday started this: the Monday Lilly Palour first saw that small, insignificant lump perched upon her left breast. I'm her ghost writer.
“More coffee?” the waitress asks with a fixed, pouting smile. Her lovely crème blouse is marred by a coffee splatter and the hair slipping out of a ridiculous bun is a dull, dun brown.
“You're blocking my view,” I say, tapping the elegant fountain pen against my pad of paper. She tries to arch her bushy brows at me but the botox filled face protests, barely stretching.
“Move,” I say. She grinds her teeth and attempts a scowl but meets the same problem as before, her face as smooth and lacking in humanity as a cardboard cut out. With the sharp stomp of heels, she moves away, ready to serve some naïve fool with her spittle filled coffee.
The view is essential if I'm to get my work done. The café is drab and repulsively efficient, but the people provide some dribble of inspiration. At one table, a suited couple sit. The man has coffee on his tie and the thick black hair is ruffled while his partner (cooing over him like a plump, mother hen) is immaculately clean. They meet here every lunch time, being mushy and gushy and ever so in love. Watching their mannerisms helps me to decide how Eric and Sophie Wells might act.
Mother hen is standing up. It's exactly ten to one. Mr coffee stain stands too and kisses her cheek dutifully.
“Don't want to be late,” he says, eyes on the clock.
“Have a good day,” Mother hen coos and they set off in opposite directions. Five minutes later, Mr coffee stain returns with a slim brunette. This is the conflict I'm depending on.
“Have you told her yet?” Bug eyes (that's the brunette) asks as they hover by the table where Mother hen's scent still lingers and her coffee cup sits awkwardly beside his. Mr coffee stain pulls the chair out and Bug eyes fills it, and he watches her fill it, admiring the way her body fills it less than plump Mother hen filled it. His gaze lingers on her bare, long legs, travelling up towards the black mini skirt.
“It wasn't a good time,” Mr coffee stain says smoothly, taking his seat. He very clearly has no intention of leaving Mother hen. If he were a character, no one would love him, so I don't understand why Bug Eyes does. And she does. She looks disappointed and her lower lip trembles but she expected the answer: it's never a good time.
“I'm sorry Sugar Bear,” Mr coffee stain continues. “But she's not been feeling well lately and...” I don't hear the other half of his sentence: an idea has suddenly struck me. I smile as I jot it down. The first genuine smile in days. Wouldn't it be just perfect if Sophie were to die? The original author wouldn't think so, she'd consider it a horrible idea, but then, I'm not her and she isn't here. Dee's in charge now, that's for sure.
“Coffee?” the waitress asks, pausing at their table. Mr coffee stain orders for them both: another regular and a decaf.
“Can you take these?” Bug eyes asks quietly in her sweet little voice. The waitress grunts and takes away the empty cups, the evidence of Mr coffee stain's rendezvous with his wife.
“So how about that movie? My place?” Mr coffee stain squeezes her knee and leans closer, shadowing her slight figure. She murmurs an answer and their breath mingles as he opens his mouth to swallow it whole.
“It will be fun,” he promises. Bug Eyes nods, a little reluctantly.
As they leave, I lean back against the hard metal of my seat; one of the wires digs through my spine. Lately, every minor annoyance threatens to throw me into fits of anger... or tears. I look down into my empty coffee cup and a wry smile jerks my face. You know what would make a great scene?
The tent was small and cramped, forcing Eric to sit closer to his wife than was altogether appropriate in public. But then, nothing about the Carnival had ever felt appropriate to him: loud music thrashing through the tents, garish stripes of colour everywhere and worst of all, beggars, thieves and fortune tellers in abundance. Sophie giggled and squeezed Eric's hand compulsively.
"Isn't this fun?" she gushed, "Wasn't this a good idea?" Eric smiled and nodded agreeably but his eyes didn't follow hers to the china coffee cup. They were both dressed in grand clothes: a new suit for Eric and Sophie's pretty, lace dress fit snugly around her curves. They looked out of place against the gaudy gypsy woman with her beads and bangles; braids in her hair.
"So what does this show?" Sophie asked.
"That's a good omen," the fortune teller replied with a charming smile, her lips painted a garish shade of red. "It's in the shape of a chalice which means you're going to live a very long life." Sophie smiled and clapped her hands. Eric wished she wouldn't do that. It was bad enough when children had difficulty masking their emotions but... a grown woman? And worse, it wasn't that she couldn't: she refused to.
Sophie sighed as she took the cup from her lips and stared at the watery, brown dregs. How could everything go so wrong in just a week? She let the cup slip through her fingers and shatter with a satisfying crash. How could she by dying, did the fortune teller know and say it just to spite her? Sophie slumped against the table and cried loudly against her arms as Eric watched from the door-way, hovering like a shadow at the edge of her awareness.
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