Hey people of YWS, I've returned as of now, i will most likely be leaving again, as soon as i get my needed reviews. It's just because the fact I've written many chapters on a new book, and i thought they needed some reviews, and what better place then YWS.(of course!) So ya.
BTW, I'm not sure whats up with the big hole in front of all my sentences but i can't seam to fix it...sorry V_V.
Disturbia
Prologue
What would happen, if I died here?
Would the world die with me? Or would I die with the world?
We are connected, after all.
Sometime I wonder, if I did the right thing coming here, did I fulfill my purpose?
Did I serve you the best I could?
I hope that if I return you will reward me with what I desire most.
I desire something more, something that I can cherish.
Something like…You.
CHAPTER 1
The Queen
LIGHTING crackled in the sky, thunder boomed across the dead valley. Even in this massive uproar footsteps could be heard as they marched through the damp grass. Two figures could be seen. Rain dripped down the boy’s face, his cold black hair hanging in front of his eyes. Were it only the rain that fell that day, when the sun would shine no more. As the boy walked farther into the darkness, the body behind him became heavier and heavier.
“Is your life…more important than mine?”
He said to the body.
“I mean, I am the cause of all this, right? Do I even deserve to live anymore?”
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“But father!”
“No! I will not allow this; you will remain here until this mission is over!”
The boy sat down on a small wooden bench. He sighed and
took his sword out of its sheath and examined it.
“What’s the point in having you, if I can’t use you?
He touched his hand to the insignia of a lion, caressing it.
“Where is the honor in sitting here, waiting for you to return?”
He sighed again, placing the sword back into its sheath.
“Well that settles it then, to Leblanc.”
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“I should have just stayed there, then maybe…maybe”
Tears ran down his face, he cried as hard as the rain. He knelt down and shoved his face into the grass.
“I cannot save you, I can barley save myself!”
He smashed the ground.
“This is your fault!” He yelled.
“I hate you!” He raised his head to the sky.
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“Where have you gone, my father?” The boy marched his horse deep into the forest.
“He should have been headed for Leblanc, but I’ve all but passed that.”
The sun disappeared behind the trees as he went deeper into the wood. A chill passed his spine as he went deeper and deeper into the darkness. Looking ahead he could see seven figures sitting around a fire. He got off his horse, and tied its reigns to a nearby tree. He walked closer, making sure to be discreet. He could recognize one of the figures as his father, and his knights. Two other’s sat by the fire, yet he did not recognize them. Once as close to the fire as he could be without revealing himself, he knelt down behind a tree and opened his ears.
“I’m sorry to disappoint you, but I only have but 200 troops at my disposal at the time.” The man’s voice was deep and recognized as his fathers.
“Mr. Bursoda, 200 troops is but close to nothing, compared to that of the Mura’s.” A cold voice spoke, that of a woman. Her voice sounded like nails on a chalkboard as she continued to speak.
“Now if you wish to live to see the end of this war, bring me more troops.”
“I’m sorry but the only other way for me to receive troops is permission from the king, in which he has denied my request many a time.”
“Please do not lie to me Mr. Bursoda; I do not enjoy being lied to.” Her face turned to a frown, and her eyes grew wide as she looked into his father’s eyes.
“How many troops did you bring with you today, Mr. Bursoda?”
In confusion he answered obliviously.
“Um, 4, as you can plainly see.”
“Well then who is this young man?” Suddenly a large hand grabbed the boy and thrust him out into the open. Everyone looked in shock, all but the women, of course.
“Son, what are you doing here?”
“I told you to stay at the castle!”
“Oh my, oh my, this is your son is it?” The women laughed aloud. The father looked at her quickly in shock.
“No, please my queen, leave him out of this!”
She laughed again.
“I’ll make a deal with you then Mr. Bursoda.”
“You supply me no troops at all, just the boy.” The large man had his arm held behind his back, to prevent his escape. He grunted and he struggled trying to get away.
“Please my queen! I could never do that! He is my only son!”
“Well it seems it’s your only option Mr. Bursoda.”
“Dorgon, we’re leaving.” The queen and the large man left, taking the boy with them.
“Father!” He screamed.
“Drop him you witch!” The father demanded as he ran straight for the queen. Sword draw, he stabbed at her heart. Within a second his father lay on the ground, his own sword threw his chest.
“No! Father!” The boy yelled. The other knights charged the queen as well. Ice rose from the ground in spikes under the knights. Screams filled the used to be quiet forest. The boy elbowed the large man in the stomach, and ran toward his father’s corpse.
“Father…?” He said as he cried over him. The queen laughed once more.
“Well well, I’ll be the kind queen I am and allow you to mourn your father’s death.” The forest became suddenly very cold and a windswept around the queen and her large servant. A laugh could be heard as they disappeared into the sky.
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The boy looked back at the forest.
“Who is she? I wonder.”
“She was a queen, of something…”
He lifted himself off the ground and looked down at his father’s body.
“I’m so sorry, I couldn’t return you to the castle, but if I continue on like this, I won’t make it either.”
“From this day forward, I’m going to make a vow that I will be more like you, like the king you wanted me to be.” He clinched his fist.
“I guess I’ll make my way to Leblanc again.” He looked at his father once more, and made the long walk to the capital city of Leblanc.
END CHAPTER 1
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