Well, as the title says, this is a possible script for a comic I've been too lazy to get drawing. It's an action comic about demons and stuff.
One thing before we begin. Names in lowercase (but beginning with a capital) are minor characters whose names are irrelevant, and any similarity to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. Same goes for major characters (as well as semi-major recurring characters), except their names will be in all caps.
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The middle of a desert, empty other than a few boulders here and there and a massive expanse of sand. Two robed figures have been trudging through the dirt for at least a few hours. On closer inspection, the figures are in fact a pair of angels whom, to avoid confusion, we shall call Gregory and Elizabeth.
Gregory: It's around here somewhere... I'm sure of it.
Elizabeth: I can feel something, and whatever it is has the most powerful magical aura I've ever felt.
The duo begin to scrabble around in the sand beneath their feet. After a few minutes, Elizabeth cries out in excitement and holds something up in the air. As Gregory inspects it in awe, we get a closer look: it appears to be a slightly indigo crystal orb, but there is something sparking in the middle of it.
Before the angels can celebrate too much, arrows begin to hit the ground around their feet. The arrowheads are a crimson colour and seem to be smoking slightly. The angels look up to see the source of the arrows, a troupe of three demons: Wilbur, Maddison, and the leader Adrian.
Adrian: So you've found it. Our Master needs that orb... so please, do yourselves a favour and give it to us willingly. We don't want to have to hurt you.
Maddison: What? Of course we do!
Adrian: ... Yeah, you're right.
The demons charge at Gregory and Elizabeth. What follows is a fight between the two groups, and it's no contest: the angels thrash the demons, who are all vaporised.
Elizabeth: More will show themselves. We should leave now.
INFRA (off-panel): Hold on a minute...
The angels turn back to where the demons appeared from. A small figure (INFRA) can be seen, but it is engulfed in shadow. Only its eyes pierce the darkness, one white, one red.
Gregory: Who's there?
INFRA: My name doesn't matter. But I need the orb for my Master too.
Elizabeth (to Gregory): He's a demon...his aura gives him away.
Gregory: Yes, I felt it too. (to INFRA) Demon! If you really want this orb, then come and take it!
INFRA: ... All right.
INFRA charges towards the angels. Gregory draws his sword and prepares to behead INFRA, but as he slashes INFRA drops and rolls along the ground, before leaping to his feet and hurling a pair of fireballs into Gregory's back. Gregory shouts in pain as he sizzles into vapour. Meanwhile, Elizabeth has an arrow in her bow and a finger on the string.
Elizabeth: It... controls fire?
INFRA takes advantage of her shock to turn to her and begin sending fireballs in her direction. Elizabeth manages to dodge the barrage and fires her own arrows back. INFRA, continually advancing on Elizabeth, either dodges or deflects her projectiles. Finally, he catches one, lights it on fire, appears right in front of Elizabeth and plants the arrow in her belly. Elizabeth shrieks as she burns for a second before becoming vapour as well. INFRA walks over to where Elizabeth dropped the orb, picks it up and "absorbs" it into his skin. He then stares at the ground for a few seconds, causing a large hole to appear, the middle of which seems to be a swirl of red and black. INFRA jumps straight in.
A chamber whose walls, floor and ceiling are of red rock... it could be mistaken for a cave inside a volcano. It is lit by small fires that sit in various corners of the room. A tunnel leads out of the room, and opposite the tunnel is what appears to be a large hole, the inside of which is pitch-black. INFRA enters the chamber; in the light we can see his body is entirely red and white, with a zigzag running down his middle, and that he has no visible nose, mouth or digits. He steps up to the hole.
INFRA: Master LUKE, I have returned successful.
INFRA "pulls" the orb from his body and holds it up to the hole. A pair of horrible glowing eyes appear within the hole (those of LUKE). The pupils and irises are black, with pure red scieras (you know, that bit of the eye that's usually white).
LUKE: Perfect, INFRA.
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That's all for now. Don't worry (as if you were), this isn't all of it, obviously. I'll keep adding to it as I go. Enjoy!
-Mattster
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