Sparkle's Strange Stanzas

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I'm going to try to do NaPoWriMo this year, I'm very excited! Good luck to everyone! I'm probably going to end up writing a lot of haikus, but I'll try my best! :D
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I wander through the woods of green,
On banks of rivers wide.
I walk with stealth, felt but not seen;
I know just where to hide.

Upon my brow, a flower wreath,
Of red and gold and blue.
My hair, the spiders did bequeath;
Their webs to catch the dew.

I wear a gown of river fronds;
My wings are webbed and thin.
I dwell in forest lakes and ponds,
And pull wanderers in.

The Faerie Queen, they call me still;
None know my ancient name.
Often I save, often I kill;
To me it is the same.
"So what? All writers are lunatics!"
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I don't really know how to do the grammar for this poem, anyone have any advice?

Eventually

Walk on water
Walk on smoke
Walk on fire
Freshly stoked

Walk on air
Or tops of trees
Walk on roads
And pay the fees

Walk on grass
Or walk on stone
Walk on flowers
Newly grown

If you run in bursts
Or walk perpetually
We all get there
Eventually
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Hard and fast rules about grammar go out the window when it comes to poetry (although beware of improper uses of semi-colons in Audy's presence), so use whatever punctuation makes it read the way you intend. Personally, I think it's fine like it is, without any punctuation.
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Ok, thanks!
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I like this:
My hair, the spiders did bequeath;
Their webs to catch the dew.


But I somehow liked it more when I thought it was a human and not a faerie queen.
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Today I did one of those stream of consciousness poems where you just write and don't do any edits. It was pretty fun. :-D

Sometimes I walk in the mornings,
Early, before people wake up
And the world buzzes gently
With the potential
Of everything that still sleeps.
I walk out the door
And into world unknown
Where no one exists except me
My shadow
And sometimes a book.
I sit on a bench
Or on the grass
Or on hard, unrelenting concrete.
Sometimes I read
Sometimes I draw or write
And sometimes I just close my eyes
And think.
When dawn cuts pink and blue and orange
Into the navy morning
I open my eyes
And look up
And watch the world
Come to life.
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#1, Hannah took the line I was gonna poke. That is just juicy. The rest of the poem has good imagery and the rhymes flow very sing-song ^_^


#2 I like where it eventually took me. The progression was kind of cool!

#3 This one is my favorite. It just feels more honest to goodness genuine voice, and had a gentle slice of life thing going too, which I appreciate.

Keep 'em coming!




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This is a bit more morbid than most of what I usually write, but I thought I would try something new. I was experimenting with format, too. I also decided to forgo the pink font, as it kind of ruins the tone of the poem.



F
I wait on the brink, my mind in turmoil. I cut white paper into tiny pieces, the scissors glittering in my hand. I am waiting, for what I don’t know. For dawn. For dusk. For nothing at all. For everything.
A
The wind whistles in my ears. I rock back and forth in the old rocking chair. It creaks, each noise a tentative scream. My hair flutters about me like a cluster of butterflies startled by a movement.
L
The scissors snip at the paper, and suddenly they catch something larger and softer. Blood seeps from my finger, staining my dress. The scissors stop. The red is bright in this sharp, grey landscape.
L
I stand up, the pieces of cut paper tumbling down into the ravine at my feet. Blood drips down with them, intermingling with the snow-like flakes of paper. A deadly rain of red and white.
I
My dress snaps and whips around my legs. Bare feet gripping the edge. Tenaciously or barely? I can’t tell.
N
Whispers. Screaming. Silence. Blood in the snow. Wind. Nothing but wind. I can’t hear I can’t hear I can’t hear I can’t hear the silence for the wind
G
Suddenly my feet lose their grip and I realize I have always been
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Time passes slowly.
We grow old and grapes turn to
wine in the summer.
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Come into the forest, dear!
You’ll see the faeries have danced here
In circles ringed with toadstools red
Upon bare feet they swiftly tread.

There is where the old witch dwells
Whose hair is long with braids and bells.
One wish, she’ll grant with toss of dice
But only if you’ll pay the price.

The trees, the speak in somber tones
Of whispered tales and dead men’s moans
Watch out! They’ll just as soon ensnare
As embrace all who enter there.

The gremlins and the goblins creep
The dark grows large and black and deep
Softly, slowly, sneaks the Night
Run back, run back! Or die of fright.
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Yesterday’s yesterday, I found a box
Buried in the park
Under a rose bush.
It was old, or
Seemed so at least,
With a dancing elephant carved
Into the soft light wood
Blackened with dirt.
I was digging for buried treasure.
Seems I do that a lot these days,
Search for things I know
I won’t find.
But maybe I did find it,
Somehow,
Buried treasure at the heart
Of an enchanted forest
Where young couples walked
Hand in hand
Amidst the screaming children
And lonely walkers.
That thrice-damned box.
It’s sitting on my bedside table now.
I don’t know what to do with it.
If I open it, who knows
What I might find?
Closed, it could be anything.
A secret journal.
A dead man’s skull.
A million dollars,
My ticket out of here.
But even I know
Elephants can’t really dance
And they always did say
I was a coward.
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I fell in love with books in second grade
When the words on the pages
Grew wings and flew to my brain
And out again through my lips,
Silky and smooth and beautiful.
When the smell of the pages
And the way the black letters looked
On white or beige, like some
Elaborate pattern stitching worlds
And stories and people together
Enthralled and enchanted me.
When the people in the books
Came to life and I realized
That every single one of them
Was me
Or who I used to be
Or who I could become.
When I walked a thousand lifetimes
In someone else’s shoes
And found things I didn’t know existed
And wonders I had never dared to dream.
When I realized that reading
Is the same thing as flying
But with less audacity and more beauty.
When the books brought me others,
Readers and writers alike,
And I realized that I wasn’t
The only one.
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Isn’t it strange
That I’m nothing like you
But we feel the same things
We both do what we do
That we think different thoughts
In the same sort of rhythm
That we pass people by
And the next day walk with them
That you are a stranger
And you are a friend
And we both can break
Soon after we bend
That we like different books
That tell the same stories
That we like some things sweet
And other things gory
That we may pass the other
Every single day
And yet say nothing;
Is there nothing to say?
For we are the same
Just as much as we’re not.
Are we too old for new friends
Or have we just forgot?
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In a forest green and grey
Far across the sea
Lives a princess in a tower
Who dreams of being free.

In a deep cave in a desert
Far across the plains
Lives a dragon with his treasure
Who hates it when it rains.

In a kingdom in the mountains
Far across the swamp
Lives a prince who rides to battle
With splendor and with pomp.

In a cavern underground
Far across the world
Live goblins and gremlins
With red eyes and long horns curled.

In a house in a small town
Not so far away
Lives a girl with book and pen
Who always dreams away the day.
"So what? All writers are lunatics!"
-Cornelia Funke, Inkspell



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