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it wasnt like I was very smart back then...so it wasnt like I could understand why I was blind but could see the future. Why my friend was mute, but could still speak. How one of us was unable to touch, but could feel through the air. Each one of us was different, how the deaf one heard voices or the handicapped boy could float...we were hindered but special.

It could be why the government recruited us all,well, no didnt recruit. They took us from our parents as soon as we showed signs of being special,as soon as I could write like any normal person, paint perfect pictures of both life and carnage, but was blind like no shadows.I didnt know how to really draw, I didnt like it. I preferred to show it through hands and explain it...my vocabulary was extensive...I loved the sound of audio books...

Id never seen the present, and somehow that made the future hurt. how I'd never be able to really tell who was who. I was blind, I had no use for the match ups. The future...it didnt have a set sound so I couldnt tell people by their voices...most of my visions had no meaning, especially not the good ones....

I could converse with my friends though. MY mute friend could read what I meant and responded into my head with her voice of the mind. My deaf friend could talk just like me and even wrote brail explaining some things to me...
I panicked sometimes when I was lifted off the ground by my floaty friend, because his hands were a little weak even though his gestures were sure. HE couldnt move his limbs very far, but I couldnt see....

We were all special. Now...now we are glad to be free. No one can survive without the other, so we have to work together to stay out of the way of the government. If they catch us...only I know what will happen. Well...Ive seen it, but maybe my mute friend though of it, or my deaf friend heard it...either way, what hinders us makes us stronger...
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ok, so the plot is that, as of different ages, heights, looks and personality's. You have to give them a flaw to go with their power, of course. IT doesnt have to relate directly,but it should since it makes it seem a bit more....fair?
Form-
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Flaw & Power:
Looks:
Personality:
Other?:

Name:Alice Denport
Gender:Female
Age:14
Flaw & Power: She is blind, but can see the future
Looks:She is,of course, not normal ,but since she cant see she is very...natural.
Her hair is always wavy,sometimes curled by air drying when she has it wet. Her eyes are big, doe like but an odd, hazed-over color that is a milky blue. She is clearly blind and yet of course she cant see herself so she cant care what she looks like. Her face is narrow, pale and sharply boned. Her body is petite, sharp and defined in a few very slight curves and muscles. Her entire frame is willowy,not meant for strength rather than speed, agility and flexibility. Her pupils are always wide, almost the size of her iris itself and never reacting to any light. It reacts only to her visions, and even then only very certain visions.
Personality:She is actually very....gentle for someone who is known to have never seen the light of day,really, and have seen carnage probably since before she could talk. Her entire being is toward trying the help people but the problem is she doesnt know how. there is no sound in her visions, only sight, no smell, and no touch. She cant recognize the people she sees wither, so its a little confusing truing to piece together all their powers into one helpful piece of information.
Other?:NOt really, other than she probably isnt the smartest person in their little group.

Rules-
Of course, no mary/gary sues
If they have a power, they have a flaw
I wouldnt mind some fellow people to help me come up with rules for the story, or some people locking down on some rule breakers ;)
If your confused of something,PM me about it and Ill do my best to answer
Yes, you can have a different power/flaw than the ones I have listed, and there can be repeated ones
Hopefully we can keep the genders relatively even, but since I havent stated there would be very much romance than it isnt a priority
I will of course, add and take away rules as time continuies, so please check back into here every now and again
Any rules that are offered will be considered sp dont be shy to post/message me offering one up :)
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You should make this into a poem instead of an SB. I would totally review it. Also, i'm not certain, but maybe i'll post a profile. Still debating :)
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Thanks! Sorry,im a little new here, but where would I do that? xD Thanks, and I hope you do!
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Question:

What are the rules for the SB?




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those will be in the first post as soon as I finish it :)
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OK, so I would guess thats it for the editing :) Anyone wanna post,post!
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What do you mean by
no mary/gary sues
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wordsandwishes wrote:What do you mean by
no mary/gary sues
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As in,no one who looks.acts 'perfect' like...no one without flaws. I mean, they all have a flaw, but it would be nice if there was more than one, such as too gentle, too kind, may not act quite right,etc. Flaws are good, a Mary Sue is a perfect character.
It's been so long since I've last been on YWS, and I need to get back into it :)




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Okay, I got it now.
Thanks!
I'll be posting tomorrow btw.

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Edit- I'm sorry guys, but I won't be able to participate in this one. I just couldn't get my character right.
Sorry. :(
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I'd love to join! If I could reserve a female slot that would be great. I'm actually physically disabled, so this sounds awesome to me.
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no need to reserve, but awesome, the more the better :)
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When will it start? I'm eager to join :D
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Anyone can podt their fotms now :)
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Name: Liam Harris

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Flaw & Power: Left arm ends at the shoulder. Able to set fire to something by touching it.

Looks: Bright green eyes and Brown hair that sweeps across his eyes. Cheeks and nose sprinkled with freckles. He has a height of 5'9 and is very skinny but also is very strong and muscular.

Personality: Liam is very tough but is also very funny. He can be super serious and scary one second and the next he is cracking jokes. He loves football. He will protect anyone he loves and will help anyone in need.

Other?: He has a sister (see below)




Name: Chloe Harris

Gender: Female

Age: 11

Flaw & Power: Mute. Able to read minds and talk to other people in their minds.

Looks: Green eyes and brown hair, like her brother. Her hair falls to her waist is stick straight. She usually wears jeans and a cute shirt. She is a short 4'6 and is very small and cute.

Personality: Chloe is really nice and loving. She loves to help and is most of the time pretty shy. Once you get to know Chloe she will never leave your side. She is hard to be friends with because shes so shy and protective of her self. But when she does let you in she will be your best friend.

Other?: She has a brother (See above)
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