Aw, come on guys. Just ONE person crit my story. Please? Just one? or maybe two...I love my story (in an obsessed, infatuated way) and I want you guys to read and crit it so you can mutilate it, tear it apart, and help me put it back together gently, so that it will be better and I can love it more. Please?
btw, I actually met the main character (who is, btw, my perfect guy) he lives in the "town" over from me. He's perfect. Just saying.
Is it the room?