Several Drawings, including a flying Pig

I drew this at school. I hope you all like it. I'd love constructive critics by the way.

So here's a Dragon:

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And here's a bunch of others. A crown, a Cyclops, a flying Pig (as promised), and an apple (which used to be colored), respectively:

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You have potential, keep up the good work.

Hey, these are some pretty cool doodles! I'm kinda a doodler myself. I think the hardest thing about drawing at school/in class is that you rarely have a reference for your work. You get the urge to draw and just sketch stuff on the margins or on scrap paper. So for these being drawn in class, I think they are very accurate!

I think my favorite was the cyclops guy, the sketchy way you drew him was pretty cool. And the pig was pretty good too. To me, those stood out because they looked the most detailed.

The apple and the crown were less exciting for me. The shape of the apple doesn't look right-on but kinda lopsided. And the crown picture just looked like on outline, there really wasn't much shading or anything to make it stand out.

For the dragon picture, I think it would help if you made the picture larger and included its legs and tail and stuff. The head and everything looks pretty good, but then we get down to the shade of its neck and it just stops. For me, I'm not quite sure if that's the top of its body that you drew, or still part of a long neck. Those three block shapes under its head kinda remind me of a stomach design, but I think it's a little too close to the head. So basically it's just a little confusing, but if you'd complete the rest of the dragon, I think it would be cleared up. Because it's a good design; I like the sharp teeth and and the details around it's face, it just doesn't look finished yet.

Hope this helped! Keep it up

the pig's skateboard says bacon...

luckystar3000 wrote:

luckystar3000 wrote:

lili024 wrote:the pig's skateboard says bacon...

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Yes, it says Bacon.