Hahaha. Somehow I feel like the 'spoiler' was aimed straight at me. It could be a haiku, all it needs is a keriji (I'll leave it to you to figure out what and where ).
From a technical point, I would replace 'fly' with something else ('float' perhaps?). I do not think it sits well next to 'butterflies'.
Nothing to critique other than that really. It's a great idea, cleverly executed. If I were you I'd ask Kylan for a review.
Stay classy,
K.
Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark. — Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X
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