Learning oppertunities.

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The great learning opportunities.
Who stole thee cake.
By Zell

Narrator: (Miss E walks in going mad saying learning opportunities make her stop please I can’t take this any more *jumps out window*).

Zach: well that was weird.
Rose: just a bit.
Rachael: what do you mean just a bit?
Miss E: *locks shocked* LEARNING OPPERTUNITIES.
Zach: ARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.
Mike: what the hell is going on here *snogs may* woo hoo.
Miss E: ARG who stole thee cake alas alack all is lost.
Mike: (very quickly) it was me and may.
May: it was us miss.
Miss E: after school detention.
Mike and May: result.
Back up narrator: they always snog all the way through it.
May: to darn true and proud of it as well.
Miss E: DO SOME WORK NON NOBILIEST STUDENTS!!!
All: ARG
Mike and May: oh well *snogs*.
Mr K: (before he even looks at the class) tuck your shirts in and mike and may stop snogging.
All: WOW he’s good at that.
Back up narrator: the fire bell goes off and Mr k doesn’t realise the false alarm.
Mr K: FIRE FIRE AL QUEDA ATTACK RUN FOR YOUR LIVES.
Miss E: (gets all her learning equipment including the interactive white board) RUN AWAY AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Zach: this is getting weird now.
Rachael: never Zach.
Zach: yeah it is actually.
Rose: be quiet
Mike:*sings the song quiet by Ian Dury and the blockheads* wahey.
All: shut it and run cause the teachers have ran away.
May: come over to mine and let’s do something great.
Mike: *very quickly* ok then what do you have on mind.
May: homework of course.
Mike: of course exactly what I was thinking.
May: really I have to go to the toilet be right back.
Mike: ok.
Zach: you weren’t thinking about homework were you because you never do it.
Mike: no I wasn’t but shush don’t want her to know.
Zach: I know *walks away*.
May: *comes back* hello *starts snogging mike*.
Mike: hello having fun.
May. I am now.

END.
Last edited by zell on Wed Aug 02, 2006 7:39 pm, edited 2 times in total.




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A Miss. E story? Doesn't randomian guy do them?
They're normally funny, but this one is all over the place. You're trying to be very "random", and perhaps it just annoys when people try do be like that. You spelt opportunities wrong.
So, yes, i don't get it. This was very rushed.
Stop. Look. Jive!




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Randomians my girlfriend and we do them together and i was thinking of changing it a bit which i will.




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Do you actually know what snogs means? :P




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Yeah do u actually know what it means...'ahem ahem.'

Spelling of opportunities is wrong.(oh I guess Gazza has already pointed out.)

Though a bit funny but totally confusing.

:)
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