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Payne
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Sat Nov 26, 2011 7:37 am
Payne says... · Sat Nov 26, 2011 7:37 am
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Sat Nov 26, 2011 8:30 am
barefootrunner says... · Sat Nov 26, 2011 8:30 am
This is a really good piece -- I can't complain in any way: No typos, no spelling mistakes... It is all so sad. I loved the mood, the way you made readers care about the characters, the style in which you wrote and everything! The end was an absolute knockout blow -- this is a fantastic piece of writing in every way. Great work!
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Y'know, sometimes a family is a mutant superhuman clown with cartoony powers, a hyperactive shapeshifter created in a lab, the ghost of an artificially created being who only exists for exposition, a cat who is an eldritch god for some reason, and an emo guy who doesn't canonically exist
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