My last words to you...

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If you have hurt me so much…
Then why stay in my life?
If I was your greatest enemy,
How come you are still around?
You left me for her, she’s your everything
You took the only thing I had
My writing…
My writing was all that I needed to leave this world
But you took it with you.
Along with my heart and warm memories of us.
My own little world has crashed and vanished.
Gone from my wellbeing,
I have no more strength to keep writing…
At last you took all that I loved…
All that I had, for another girl.
In the end I was nothing more than a toy,
Only there for your amusement.
Now watch me fade away from your life,
As you will do mine.
Good bye my long lost friend.
~Lady Death~
Down in the dark, alone at night. Bleeding and Torn... Broken in the light




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good poem for close friend.I really like it.
keep writing,because i wish to see more from you!:)




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Hey i am Steven and this poem is special! It makes me feel as if it is me from my own personal exsperiences. The confusion, the hurt and the pain of the indervidual is there. It is everything i had felt in words and to et all of that in and beign able t owrite it the way you have is very very good. I hope you write more poetry as i look forward to it, hoping it is of the same standard as this piece or even better!

Keep Writing Please!
Ste Smith :)




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I'm so sorry for you :( I know the feeling all too well. It is healthy to express your feelings this way.
It was grabbing, and kept my attention long after I finished, great work :)



Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.
— Winston Churchill