Another Time

ANOTHER TIME

another second slowly pass by.
another minute fighting the urge to cry.
another hour dealing with the stress.
another day i'm put to the test.

another week of hopeless dreams and wishing.
another month feeling like something's missing.
another year to regret.
the very first moment we met.

I had goose bumps and cold chills running all down my arms and legs. Lol, you're good. This is an amazing piece of poetry. I'm not a big fan of it actually, seeing as my poetic skills are something to be ashamed *teehee*, but you, a couple others on this site, and of course Shel Silverstein, just blow my mind when I read a piece of your work. Nice job(:

Wow usually short poetry like that does not set me off and in the beggining of this piece I thought it was going to be the same until I read the last sentence. You had a very nice ease and sad tone throughout the poem and that makes it all the better.
Keep up the writting.
Your Good!

thank you so much with comments like these make me want to write more wonderful poems