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Right I basically have a 15000 word opening segment to my Novel "Hell's Tools" and I would like someone with a story with a simalar word count to read it and get some general feedback onit. In return I will review theres, I arnt talking about an in depth crit, just a 500 word like/dislike review.

I am prepared to critique work withing 5000 words to my own word count.

Thanks.

PS: If anyone would like to review it without the swap then thats welcomed as well.

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Last edited by Swires on Tue May 02, 2006 4:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Anyone? PLEASE....

Im now open to any genre apart from ChickLit
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I don't have anything in the 15,000 word range, but I'll crit yours if you want.
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