Freedom

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I'm sick this life
That maze of pain and sadness
I want to get out

I don't belong to this world
I broke the chains that binds me
And now on I'm free!

I'm free
From everyone around me
I'm free
From anything that grabs me
And I'm free
To do what I want
It's my time now
To change the world

The time is now,
Your chance
The future is waiting
It can be changed
Life is harsh
Then fight for what you believe
All you have to say is:

I wanna be (I wanna be)
I wanna change (I wanna change)
I wanna live!!

I wanna live my life
No one else will rule me
I wanna change my fate
Nobody can stop me
I wanna see the world
With all it's beauty
To throw away the dark side
I've had enough of this

I'm free
From everyone around me
I'm free
From anything that grabs me
And I'm free
To do what I want
It's my time now
To change the world

Let me run
Let me scream
And I wanna shout
I'M FREE!!!

I'm free
From everyone around me
I'm free
From anything that grabs me
And I'm free
To do what I want
It's my time now
To change the world




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Hey There,
First off, this song really describes how I feel about my life at the moment, so I thought it was cool how it hit my feelings on the head with really raw, genuine descriptions.
So, I don't know what kind of genre this song falls under- rock, pop, metal- but I really like your lyrics- just thought I'd tell you!
Keep Writing!
-Briggsy
but the sky is love and i am for you
just so long and long enough
-E.E. Cummings




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I'm sick of this life

That this maze of pain and sadness

I want to get out

I don't belong to this world

I broke the chains that binds me

And from now on I'm free! rhyming scheme up until here is intangible, if this is a song, I guess it wouldn’t matter if it’s falling in the rhythm



I'm free

From everyone around me

I'm free

From anything that grabs me

And I'm free

To do what I want

It's my time now

To change the world this para rhymed very well



The time is now,

Your chance I think this is supposed to be: My chance, you were talking about yourself all this while

The future is waiting

It can be changed

Life is harsh

Then fight for what you believeI’ll fight for my beliefs

All you have to say is:……………..I wanna change my fate

Nobody can stop me noone flows better than no body

I wanna see the world…………………To change the world Every thing in between rhymed well, flowed well, I loved your chorus. So much so I can feel it and I have a tune for it…I’ll get to sing it to myself. I don’t know where your from, maybe ppl evwhere’ll agree but where I’m from- this is the words in our hearts, everyday. Gud luck with ur future work
"The duke had a mind that ticked like a clock and, like a clock, it
regularly went cuckoo."
-- Terry Pratchett, "Wyrd Sisters"



Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins