She's a True bestfriend

Tina Vetter speaks the name,
the name of my bestfriend
gentle and caring
heart warming and loving

the one i can count on,the one i can trust
please don't ever fade from my life
i need you by my side because without you
i would die.
i'd have no strength only weakness

with you i just let it show
you make me believe,you make me who i am
there's no one in the world i would ever trade you with.

you know what i feel
you know what i've dealt
you understand everything i've gone through
and promised to stay along

you've repaired my broken hearts
you've restore my soul
you've given me everything i could ever ask for.
everything you are,all that you do
everything you mean to me
makes you my shining star
and even though it's so incredible
that's just the way you are

i'd climb a thousand mountains
and swim a thousand sea's
just to give you whatever you need
anything to be there
because you've been there for me
your the true definition of bestfriend
and meaning of specialness.

hi LooneyPandaxx here!

i really liked this piece, it really touched my heart. i also really liked the final word

specialness

just because it is a really comforting word and is fabulous!

Hey, I'm Kagi *shakes hand* and I'll review for you today. *smiles*

So cutting to the chase here, lets get down to it.

Tina Vetter speaks the name,

First little nit-pick here, I think mentioning a name here is kind of irrelevant and rather distant as we don't know who Tina Vetter is and we don't really care. To get us more involved, I feel that you should just say a voice speaks ... or Someone speaks ... that way it's more mysterious and it focuses more on the topic which is; your bestfriend.

you know what i've dealt

You need to add with at the end of dealt.

Overall, you've really captured the meaning of true friendship, of what having someone you can tell everything to really is and what it means. You really showed the love, the connection the depth of friendship that you have with this person and you really care for her. I got little tingles on my arms just thinking about it, it was really good. Although one thing, it made your poem really tacky looking by not putting a capital letter in the relevent places, let me show you; --->

you know what i feel
you know what i've dealt
you understand everything i've gone through
and promised to stay along

Here you need capitals.

Good luck editing, and don't give up.

Great poem,
Kagi x

the one i can count on,the one i can trustplease don't ever fade from my life i need you by my side because without you i would die.i'd have no strength only weakness

Needs capitals. So do a few other parts in the poem.

For the most part, it flows well. I found it hard to spot any choppy sentences. Nice poem.