Goodbye My Love

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So I'm not really sure I like this. It doesn't flow so great and it's kind of hard to follow. It kinda follows exactly what I was thinking at the time though, and floods of emotion can be quite overwhelming. This reflects that in a way... So enjoy.

I'm waiting to find
that it's only a dream;
or one crooked stitch
in a perfectly sewn seam.

Everything I wanted
and every wish I've made,
is all turning to mock me
and my hope begins to fade.

I felt like I was soaring
with the moon and stars above.
I think I know what I'm feeling:
it's this crazy thing called love.

Ageless to the world
and immune to time.
It just seems to make sense
like a poem with a rhyme.

But now its been infected
by laws, and society too.
And I think a confrontation
is long overdue.

For now I can only beg
and plead to find out why.
Why are you making me
tell my love goodbye?

Hi! This poem is awesome! I like the way you wrote about your feelings. It was emotional but wasn't overly dramatic. It was almost like you were talking to someone, telling them your story, and then, in the end, asking them, "Why? Why is this happening to me?" It was genuine.

I think that my favorite part of this poem was in the first stanza.

" ...or one crooked stitch
in a perfectly sewn seam."

I felt like this was just a nice little detail.

Nice work! Keep writing!