To poetry and imagination

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‘Which planet were you visiting?’
The teacher mockingly asks,
‘Probably another solar system.’
The student at the back laughs
‘I’m sorry ma’am’-
A failed attempt smile,
indignantly look up at the board
Laughter ripples through the class,
can’t play along anymore.

If the table were just this table,
and not a super secret advance computer
If the washing machine were just a machine,
and not a wormhole for other worlds
If my walls simply cream,
without the secret passage codes.
Would the world still be revolving?
No, everything would have stopped

Imagination keeps the world living-
and those who can’t see our world,
The world with imagination painted
on every object around,
They certainly are deprived of what is worth living
For imagination is what keeps my pulse throbbing
So what if a blind man can’t appreciate my ways
I won’t give up my eyes for what others have said

If the flow of poetry hadn’t been real
Would emotions have existed as more than surreal
So what if a deaf man can’t hear the beautiful stream
The stream of emotion following through my veins
I won’t give in to others have said.

####The blind and deaf are those who can’t see or hear in this context, not ones who have by Gods will been deprived####
Last edited by DukeofWonderland on Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:58 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"The duke had a mind that ticked like a clock and, like a clock, it
regularly went cuckoo."
-- Terry Pratchett, "Wyrd Sisters"




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I like this poem and especially this line:

If the flow of poetry hadn’t been real

It explains why the flow of the poem just stopped and I also think it had some other deeper meaning. Was I right?
Good job. I really liked it.
Keep writing-
Rayne
BE YOURSELF. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.

Two things are infinite: human stupidity and the universe; and I'm not sure about the universe

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I like this poem there was no mistakes as I read well there might have been but I was not caring about that. I was trying to see what inspired you to write this it was great. Keep up the good s



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