easter

easter

but when I added the salt, I thought
"my first boiled egg at home alone"
and knew it might not be alright

perhaps I'll burn my fingers;
just so there's something to remember

Thats good i liked the ending that was cool, you could change it abit maybe but i don't know exactly what needs changing

Pretty cool. I like to think I got all of that but what I got from it might not be at all what you meant. Chrystos Voskres

I liked it a lot, but i'm not sure you meant what I think you meant. Happy After Easter.

Well, thank you all; I forgot all about this little piece (an interesting one to come back to...), so ta muchly for taking the time to read it. Appriciated.

I like it. A lot. There really isn't anything I can think of changing. It was short and sweet. Kinda reminded me of Emily Dickinson because of how short and to the point it was. Good job!