Okay, I'm going to try to post at least one photograph a day for awhile. Hopefully a month or more. Here's two that I took a few minutes ago. I used a PICSCIO JVC HD Waterproof camera. Its a pretty nifty little thing. And I used picnik for edits. Location: My overgrown backyard. And I sort of stole that little willow statue from my mother for a few minutes, hopefully she doesnt kill me for taking it outside! But I hope you like these. =] Also, I'm trying to figure out how to make it smaller. But its not working =\
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You've two quirky pictures here, they're lovely. I actually have those little figures at home, there's quite a collection of them aren't there?
Anyway, on to the picture. XD
First off, the formatting of the picture was difficult. Would you consider resizing them? For me I couldn't get the best out of them both because I had to do too much fidgeting to have a decent look at them and even so, to have a look at the bottom of the photo I chopped off the first half. It was hard to get a real look at them and therefor, a real opinion.
Other then that, the first picture I felt was extremely bad quality. I could see you blurred some objects on purpose but, everything to me was unclear and blurry in a sense that made it hard to see. I'm not sure if it's your camera are whether you blurred it on purpose but I personally would like the people to be more clear at least as they're the focal point and the main theme of the pictures.
I liked the idea of them both, I loved the tree in the background of the first and the light filtering through each branch but again, I think it was spoilt by the fact that it was unclear.
The second one, maybe, I liked the most. I thought the black around the edges and the rounding of the edges was nice. It gave it more depth then the first.
All in all, you've quite a funky idea here. It's cool, I like it. However you need a bit of quality in these to really polish them up. I'd also love to see them in their full beauty; if you do resize them so we can see the whole picture at once, I'd be interested in having a look.
Well done on two unique photo's! Kagi xoxo
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First photo: I like the idea you had for this. It's really cool and funky, and it took me a while to understand why we couldn't see the features in the faces. Statues like that are wonderful, considering they give a message of their own. What I see in them is pretty much the roughness of their figures contrasting with the tenderness they seem to be holding on to each other. And I see you've played with that coarse side when you edited it. It's my favorite between the two, although I'm not sure I like the tree behind them.
Second photo: Again, I like it for the same reason as the first one, but I don't really like the hue around it, and it's probably the only thing that I dislike. I personality think that it would be better without it.
Keep up the great work!
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These are so cute! I love those little statues. I used to have one of my own.. and then.. let's just say it wouldn't make a good picture.
I love the tree in the background of the first one. The big blurred piece of grass though, I found it a little distracting. It might just be that it's too dark, or maybe it would look better if you didn't blur it.
I love the black around the edges in the second!
I'd have to say my favorite is the first, partly because it looks strangely realistic. :O
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Hello Tylyn! This is so creative! The photos you have taken are amazing. What I like the most is the idea of placing that lovely statue to your backyard. I love the first picture though its quality is not really great. The second picture seemed to be too much edited. Seems that you've increased the brightness & the temperature to that it made the statue looked too red at some areas. I also like the idea of having the second picture framed in that way you did and the rounded edges made it vintage-looking. Overall, you did a fantastic job!
<About the resizing issue: You can also use Picnik for resizing your images very easily. Just click on <Resize> and I recommend for you to use 500x500 or less.>
Hey guys thanks for all of your reviews! To clear a few things up. I was going for a really vintage feel here, and with the first picture, that piece of grass in the front was moving, I didn't purposely blurr it. And for the second one, I changed the temperature a bit to bring out a bit of red between the couple. Sort of like a visible spark? So if it looks pixilated and old, grainy, thats totally what I was going for! I try to have a raw vintage style. Thanks =]
Hey there Tylyn! These are some great works, I'm not really this good on reviewing but I'll try!
1 - This looks neat! The only problem about this is the angle is quite tilted and it seems to be grainy. I like the concept you placed in this one though! It has a good rule of thirds and good coloring. It's nice that you made them look tiny. The curved borders is nice to look at too.
2 - I like this one better, it's less grainy and there's no problem with the angle. the concept and the vignette or the deterioration of the borders is nice too, but I do find it quite intense. Nontheless, you captured a dreamy, nice shot with good coloring and lighting.
You have a good eye for photography, keep up the great work, okay?
My mum has those statues they are very beutiful your fantastic at yuor photography Although some of the lighting is of in centre places but all in all amazng
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