Nerd

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Yeah, I got glasses,
Go ahead,
Call me four-eyes;
I dare you.

What's on my teeth?
Oh, okay
You're going to
Say brace-face, too?

My inhaler means nothing;
I'm just sick,
A lot of kids are.
I can breath.

It isn't weird
To miss school;
I have good reasons
For not liking summer.

Well, I know
I'm not the only kid
Who writes for fun!
I bet you do, too.

See? I'm normal...
Well, maybe.
I'm not a nerd,
Am I?
A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity. -Kafka

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All the classic signs of nerdism! :D

I wish i had some of these traits, but none-the-less I am a nerd :P

i quite like this form, structure ect. The regular stanza's I feel emphasise the point of it, somehow.

And in answer to the question on the bottom, Yes, yes you are a nerd! But 'tis very good.
i think, however, that you could add more traits perhaps? 'tis a thought.

If you have any questions or a more in depth review, leave me a message and i shall get right on it :)

~Retro Disco666
'I have loved to the point of madness, which for me is the only true way to love'
~Francoise Sagan




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I am a nerd, but I don't have any of the "nerdy" stereotypness,so okay, I love this so much!!! Your poem is awesome!! It was dunny, too!!




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haha yeah most people would describe that as a nerd. I hate the word nerd and stereotypes but putting that aside it's a good poem. Please tell me you don't miss school. :)
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Haaa I LOVE IT :D that really made me smile i have braces and do happen to miss school :P



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