Nerd

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Yeah, I got glasses,
Go ahead,
Call me four-eyes;
I dare you.

What's on my teeth?
Oh, okay
You're going to
Say brace-face, too?

My inhaler means nothing;
I'm just sick,
A lot of kids are.
I can breath.

It isn't weird
To miss school;
I have good reasons
For not liking summer.

Well, I know
I'm not the only kid
Who writes for fun!
I bet you do, too.

See? I'm normal...
Well, maybe.
I'm not a nerd,
Am I?
A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity. -Kafka

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All the classic signs of nerdism! :D

I wish i had some of these traits, but none-the-less I am a nerd :P

i quite like this form, structure ect. The regular stanza's I feel emphasise the point of it, somehow.

And in answer to the question on the bottom, Yes, yes you are a nerd! But 'tis very good.
i think, however, that you could add more traits perhaps? 'tis a thought.

If you have any questions or a more in depth review, leave me a message and i shall get right on it :)

~Retro Disco666
'I have loved to the point of madness, which for me is the only true way to love'
~Francoise Sagan




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I am a nerd, but I don't have any of the "nerdy" stereotypness,so okay, I love this so much!!! Your poem is awesome!! It was dunny, too!!




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haha yeah most people would describe that as a nerd. I hate the word nerd and stereotypes but putting that aside it's a good poem. Please tell me you don't miss school. :)
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Haaa I LOVE IT :D that really made me smile i have braces and do happen to miss school :P



More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes