So, my sister wrote this and wants to show it in our county fair. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to review it by Saturday so she can make it the best that she can make it? I may set up an account on here for her, but for now I thought I'd just post this. (Kate, in the background, about me setting up an account for her: OOOH, THAT'S A GOOD IDEA!
Anyway, the poem uses titles of songs from "Phantom of the Opera," just so you know - that's on purpose, and hence the name. If you could leave reviews/comments down here for me, I'll be sure to pass them on, and we'd appreciate it. Thanks!
~Blue & Kate
As the violinist pulls his bow across my heart,
the angel of music masquerades inside my mind
and my fears dance with the phantom.
I walk across the floor,
twisted every way with sadness.
I take my seat and dream,
wishing you were somehow here again,
but you think of me no more.
I have passed the point of no return.
I have been enveloped by madness.
