Lion King

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Yea i think they are right animals have a good sense of smell he would have been following his scent from the begin and it could be more descriptive but other than that I loved it...



The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price