My Last Sunrise

I'd like to, if I may, direct you to a website of mine. It houses my series of poetry called The Searching Series that I'd like you to read and even maybe enjoy.

http://www.freewebs.com/mylastsunrise

Tell me what you think about it. Feel free to sign the guestbook too.

Thanks,
Dan

I read a few just now,
Doubt, those are beautiful...
*steals your talent*

I was blocked from the guestbook however *parents* but yeah... nice job

Nice graphics. I like what you have written.

Thankyou, thankyou.

Anyone else?

I believe this would make a great book.

Very nice. For some reason it makes me think of a sort of Modern French style.

(Hmm... that is very curious...)

Very nice.

Brilliant! I love it all....I cant wait for the next part, it sucks me in just like a storybook. I think you should seriously consider getting this published when its all said and done -

I scream a scream no man would care to hear
I feel a feeling somewhat familiar yet amplified
And I’m enjoying it

It makes me think....I like that. Sometime, I'll get you my address to my website, and we can switch opinions. Keep up the writing, it's all worth it.