Take A Chance Part 2

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Here are my two male character! Ben is Alicia's brother, and Liam is his best friend/ Alicia's love interrest. I had a really hard time drawing Liam, as you can probably see... His face isn't exactly perfect, but if you have suggestions for me, it would be great. A second (or more) opinion is always better. :)

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For the colors... Ben has brown hair and blue eyes.

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And Liam has dark brown hair and green/hazel eyes.

Thanks in advance. :)
Last edited by theotherone on Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:40 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Hey there =] Firstly, these are great. The first one is by far my favorite. The proportions are right on and the shading is spectacular. It's really quite lovely =]
The second one has a few proportional errors. The eyes are a bit too big, and the torso seems to be just a tad too small for the arms. The angle of the arms is a tid bit off too I think. It's still really nice, I mean, amazing, but not quite as good as the top one in my opinion.

You have a really nice range of lights and darks, though I would have liked to see a few more darks lol. If they have dark hair, like dark brown, then the shading should be reaaally dark and thick. But overall, these are really nice =] Well done.
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Daaaawwwwwhhhh. That's all I have to say :3

Keep on drawing those characters, I find them well to my taste! And if you could find one real-life one, then uh let me know, will yah?

Keep on drawing!

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HOOLLLYY MOOOOLLLEEEYYY!

kayla here!
Alrightt! Well Beennnn loookkss amazing. All the details on his shirt and face and pants and hiar is amaizng! I can't wait to read and look at more! :D Sooo excited!
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Kayla here to comment on your lovely drawing.

Liam looks great, the details on his face and hair and mucles look great. You have a great talent, with writng and drawing! I love both of the drawings of ben an liam. They look great. I think you have a great talent. anyy whoo. I love the story and the drawings are magnificent. I'm truely impressed.

--Kayla!!
The closest friends are the ones you'd take a bullet for, but they're the ones you constantly feel you could put a bullet in as well<33--Alex Gaskarth

"So take my life I'll had it to you, you can try on these clothes but you can't fill these shoes,"-- Poison-All Time Low



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