Five Months

Deanie wrote:Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, not my sing, I sound like a cat being squished by a car'.

Good job!

Thank you.

Rubz wrote:This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed are the hearts that can bend, for they shall never be broken." We all hurt, just don't let yourself break

Thank you! ^^ And yes, I was writing this thinking of personal experience. And again, thank you, I am feeling... Better than I was before I wrote this. Also, I promise I won't let myself break.

dolwright wrote:Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was from a personal experience, well, at least something good came out of it, I've been there too, and your lyrics made me feel like I'm not alone. thank you for writing this.

Wow! Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment!