A Gaged Love

Gaged Love

So many different choices,
so many ways to walk.
I’m in this state of confusion,
now just let me talk.You rhyme walk and talk and nothing else in this part of the poem rhymes, it's odd. Threw me off.

I want to stick with one,
but I’m telling you, it’s hard.
The one I want, I can’t.
And it’s tearing me apart.

So let me use this poem,
to describe to you a girl.
Another one I’m thinking of,
another pure white pearl.So in the poem onward you go on about how unique she is, but you say ANOTHER pearl meaning many others?

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Mature, yet rather young.
Inquisitive and unique.
Knowledge that compares to none;
At least not for her age.Your all poetic then this line isn't, it's just strait out.
Every little detail, that
Lives inside her life;
Allows for me, a shout of
Glee, that I can not describe.
A happy soul, set out for
Good. She brightens lives with
Every smile, every joke, and cry.


The only question for the world,
is whether age decides.
The lives of me, and the girl I like,
But I won’t let them decide.

I want to drop that G from AGE,
Change that four letter word,
To her maiden name,
after marriage.Pearsonaly, I think this is a bad ending. Also you chopped it up to much. In the poem you have poetic lines then random strait out not very poetic lines. Chose one! Also why do you want to drop AGE to AE it has nothing to do with her name...