Harmony

This is very beautiful. I love poetry so much that a lot of times I just can't see anything wrong with any of it. It doesn't have to rhyme, or make sense, so as long as the writer has good spelling and grammer I think it's perfect! And that's what this is. Great poem!
--Lizzie Droll

Amazing! I like how it shows that there is hope for all of the great things there are in life. It explains all of the things that all living things really want. I am curious how the voice switches from "it" to "her". Great work!

Very beautiful and elegant. I love the freeform of it. The only thing I would suggest would be altering the second verse a bit. I don't know if it was just my reading but it didn't seem to flow as nicely as the rest of it. Still, it was beautiful! you're a talented poet

Entrancing poem! It has this really melodic flow, soft and smooth. Very beautiful piece! This review isn't going to be very helpful, because I can't find anything wrong! The only thing, maybe would be...

Her voice, swells inside,

The first comma might not have to be there, because this could be read as a complete sentence, but then again, the comma is part your poem structure, so being consitent is good also. It works either way.

Anyway, great job!

<..> Kat

I like this poem. Simple, short and so sweet. I can't find anything wrong with it, I love it. I don't know who she is but for some reason I get the impression of mother nature and the world. I like how she can be whoever we want it to be, but I think the impression of mother nature might just be me.