The Rebel Kings

Kings of Rebel.

Quiet around the new,

A two in one deal,

I understand

One on the outside,

Nice and kind,

I met the Rebel Kings,

He doesn’t just listen,

A two in one deal,

One on the outside,

Kings of Rebel.

I really liked this. I thought the title was catchy and the rhythm was fresh, fun to read. My favorite line was:

I met the Rebel Kings,
And never trusted so fast.

I love the way that line sounds.

So, it sounds like this person has a split personality. But maybe you're comparing how he acts around different people? Anyways, I liked this poem a lot.

-Dai

So, it sounds like this person has a split personality.

I'm glad you understood the concept of what I was trying to get at.
And yes,
my best friend does have Split Personality Disorder.


I'm glad you liked it.
I personally didn't like it at first, but I gave it to my friend anyways.
And he loved it.
So I've been putting it out there to see what other people think of it. ^_^

Oh wow, he does have a split personality? Knowing that really gives the poem a lot more meaning and background. I really did enjoy this poem, and your friend is very lucky to have you!
-Dai

Yeah.
I figured it wouldn't have as much of a meaning to everyone else as it would to him.
And he helps me out through everything,
so I help him out through everything.

I like it, but at first I wasn't show how to read it. But that it probably me just being stupid I really liked it, and knowing that you do have a friend with a split personality makes it all the more meaningful (like Daisuki said.) Good job.
-tgirly