The piece of me thats you.

The piece of me thats you.

Deep down
(Where I’m dark and twisty)
light is found

A piece that glows,
(that makes me whole)
It stands out from the shadows

A part of me thats you;
(that keeps me together)
holds me together like glue

this was wonderfuly short and easy to read, you have a gift to gt a point across in a few lines, whereas it takes me a few stana's to do so, it was really good and i loved it! i loved the rhyming, it made it sweet, simple, and it flowed nicely, keep it up!!!

Very nice! I like it!

Keep writing,
~FW~

I love the line "where I'm all dark and twisty." I'm not even sure why, I just do.

What everyone else in front of me said.