Start, Stop, Erase

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This is my writing process...Lovely, yes, I know. I advise you to read this out-loud as fast as you can. It's really fun. :)


Start.
Stop. Erase. Think.
Tap. Scratch. Sigh. Erase.
Start. Pause. Think. Erase.
Brush. Tap. Start. Stop.
Erase.
Shift. Groan. Think.
Nothing.
Begin. Again. Growl.
Erase.
Rip. Stand.
Up.
Walk. Grab. Paper. Sit.
Down.
Tap. Tap. Scratch. Start. Strike out.
Sigh.
Erase.
Think. Ponder. Muse. Wonder.
Begin.
Stop.
Erase.
Grumble.
Close. Eyes.
Think. Daydream.
Open. Eyes.
Tap.
Start.
Stop.
Erase.
Nothing.
Get up. Leave. Annoyed.
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BAHAHAHA! I love this! It's fun to read it as fast as you can! Brilliant work!
If you want to be a great writer, don't think about what you're going to write, just write it.

I'm a huge fan of writers block! When your brain halts, with no direction for where you should go, it gives you threads. All you have to do is pull and unravel the story you're meant to write.




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This is great! This is exactly how I feel when I can get NO ideas! :D AWESOME AS ALWAYS! :D
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Writer's Block!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

XD
That's the first thing I thought of when I read this. I have never seen a poem like this before! A+ for originality.
Some critics would say this wouldn't even qualify for being called a poem, but who's to say, and who cares? I love this :)
No nitpicks from me, I can't even imagine a way to review this...

And it is fun to read fast XD
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I love this poem! It is so original. I really only have one nitpick. After every word you put a full stop aprt from one.
TheScratchMan wrote:Tap. Tap. Scratch. Start. Strike out.

It could be like that on purpose or or maybe just a typo.
It is really fun to say fast. Anyway, Keep up the great writing! :D
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A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
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This was such a different poem! I have only one nitpick, and it's that you'd make nouns full sentences. examples:
Close. Eyes.
or
Begin. Again.
or (especially this one for me)
Walk. Grab. Paper. Sit.
It messes with the flow, in my opinion! Maybe no one else noticed that, but it bugged me... especially since you had "Strike out" as one sentence; I though things like, "Why couldn't he do that with 'begin again'?" But anyway, great work. This poem was really fun to read, and I liked it!
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i really liked the poem...................................it was a fun to go through it.........................i have never read such poem before.......keep writing more.........
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