Buzzy

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Yet another poem I had to make for Language Arts. This one was about a tough time that I went through. So, yeah. When my dog died I cried every night for a month. This poem is dedicated to him.
P.S. Don't mind the weird, different amounts of lines in each stanza... I know it's odd but, oh well.

Buzzy

Black and white he was spotted.
Loyal and kind did he act.

He was an angel
in canine form.
He was a true friend.
whenever he was needed,
he was always there.

Until he died.

We will miss him
but he will watch us
from heaven.
And he wants us
to move on
and find more happiness.
Even if it’s with a different dog.

I love you Buzzy.

Awww, this was so sweet. Just one thing: Typically when writing a poem you capitalize the first letter of each line. Just a thought. It's okay the way it is, but I'm picky about that kind of thing.

Like I said, very nice.

Its a very big transition and adds the shock effect at the stanza that states right out into the open,

Until he died.

. It makes the poem more intresting and leads the reader to go on. I like how the poem acts a eulogy to your beloved dog. The end,

I love you Buzzy.

, is a great conclusion that sums up all of its descriptions. Great and memorable work!

This was a sweet poem, suitable for your sweet dog. I don't really like the way the first stanza is worded, but other than that it was great! Well, that's about all I have to say... keep writing!