This actually relates to my feeling right now because I just poested my first story and since I am new I don't think anyone will review it, But what a nice twist on a classic spongebob moment, I don't like how at the end all you added was lala you could have made up something more clever.
F= Finally finishing something!! and not giving up U= U liked it!! I AM SOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPPYYYYY!!!!!! N= Now, I guess I'll move on to reading and writing other stuffs :p Thats fun for me.
F is for fandom that spreads through the whole site,
U is for update daily,
N is the newbies we welcome every day, down here on Writers Society!
F is for freaking writers block,
U is for underlying pain!
N is for never receiving reviews, when you're-
F is for friends you meet on the whole site.
U is for understanding, TRY IT!
N is for new young writers, down here on Writers Society.
F is for fantastic stories,
U is for you helping me.
N is for Nate and his amazing writing site,
and writing with my best buddies!
Lala lala la la
Lala lala la la
Lala lala la-
Down here on Writers Society!
Yeah... Sorry for filling the comment with quotes from your story. I just don't have much to review. When I like something, I like something. When I don't like something, I don't like something. As simple as that. I liked it.
Like a dragon, I'll spread my wings and fly. Fly far away from this hatred planet and fly somewhere deep, where I shall be alone. My imagination is paradise.
cute very cute 
