Relationships

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mustang
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Tue May 24, 2011 5:51 pm
mustang says... · Tue May 24, 2011 5:51 pm
Relationships are like cars, the brakes will stop you but the weels will get you going and keep you going.
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Jalmoc
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Wed May 25, 2011 12:57 pm
Jalmoc says... · Wed May 25, 2011 12:57 pm
This is very true... But sometimes, the brakes don't always work. ;)
If you don't take a chance, you'll always live your life in regret, so let your heart show it's true colors and admit your feelings!

Tis not the blade that took your life, but the Assassin behind it.

When Reality has all but fallen away, recreate your own world
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Justagirl
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Sun May 29, 2011 6:20 pm
Justagirl says... · Sun May 29, 2011 6:20 pm
So, so true.

If you arranged this a little differently....
Relationships are like cars,
the brakes will stop you
but the wheels will get you going
and keep you going.

Then it could be a poem!

Just an idea. Other than that it's great :D

Keep writing,
Alzora
"Just remember there's a difference between stalking people on the internet, and going to their house and cutting their skin off." - Jenna Marbles

~ Yeah I'm letting go of what I had, yeah I'm living now and living loud ~
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