Always

I will always be there for you,
No matter what,
That’s what I will do,

I will never leave you alone,
You will always have me at your side,
It doesn’t matter what happens,

When I said,
“Til death do us part.”,
I meant it,

And if death does manage,
To rip us apart,
I will always,
Always,

Find a way back to you,
So you will always have me at your side,
To comfort you,
To hold you,
To lull you to sleep,
I will never leave.

Hey horses!!!

Looks like I'm reviewing for ya today XD. Ok first of all absolutely LOVED this greatly. I loved this I just say it might be longer...add more details or something lol....not really sure it just seemed a little short but it's fine just as it is XD. I didn't find anything wrong with the grammar so I can't critique that. So I shall say I loved it and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and Buenas Suerte. Happy Writing.
Soulkana<3

Heyo there =]. So this piece had a good message, the normal love scene. The execution was a bit sloppy though. The flow was just really choppy and for a short poem its noticeable. So I like it =] but just change the wording a bit maybe. Luck!