This took me a lot longer to make than I originally planned, lol. A chunk off my Saturday x) But I learned a lot from it. Even though I can spot several mistakes already, like how his hair got cut off and how her hand looks like it's scratching her butt...
Sorry for the title that doesn't really fit x(
The bad news is we don't have any control. The good news is we can't make any mistakes. -Chuck Palahniuk
Did you also notice how it kinda looks like he's peeing? Haha! XD
I like this alot, especially the design of her dress, it's super cute
Their expressions are really sweet and happy and it's an all around up-beat feeling I really enjoy it all!
Just a thought? Maybe you should have her looking back over her shoulder at him? Just so we get more of a connection between these two characters and a bit more relevance to the title. And that's all I gots to say!
Hey, I lurve these! Of course I have to be (da da da da) nitpickedy. But I'm going to stay away from the mistakes that you already pointed out. You said one hand on the girl looks like it is scratching her butt, well the other hand looks a little... abnormal. Her fingers (they are fingers right???) are a bit too fat and it kind of looks like she has an extra one (but that's just me). She has knees...and elbows! Now for the dude, there isn't much fault with him. Well, except that he has no arms. Or at least he doesn't look to have arms. Other than that, the jeans are a little awkward. They are tight enough in back to show his butt, but baggy enough in front to hide his knees. Nice job over all though! ~Brook
Black Sheep, I'm gonna run out of things to say if you keep creating amazing artwork! You know the review-drill ;D
First off, love the background! It looks so seamless and flowing; how'd you make it? What did you use? I MUST KNOW YOUR SECRETS!
The guy's head/hair are very well drawn, and so are his jacket and pants (the pants are very form-fitting, lol). Good ensemble, he looks ready for a party!
I like the dress on the girl too. So bright and eye-catching! And whatever that necklace is, it's cool too. The one misgiving I have about her is that it looks like her tongue is sticking out, which kind of throws the whole balance of the picture out-of-whack a bit. She looks goofy while he looks serious, which can sometimes work, but I think with the background and all the elements together, it just looks a little out of place. That's really the only part I would have done differently though!
I LOVE the color blending on the hair, especially the girl's. How did you do it? I DEMAND TO KNOW THE SECRETS!
Anyway, as always, very strong artwork, and I hope there's more coming so I can keep reviewing! - SOCKS
How can I be king of the world? Because I am king of rubbish. And rubbish is what the world is made of. — Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane