Two Koi

I liked this poem very much. The contraction was really nice. I can't really find anything grammar or spelling that was wrong. So I can't really say anything about that. However I really liked it and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and Happy Writing. I really really really loved it. Good luck and Sayonara!
Soulkana<3

This poem was descent. Short and cut straight to the point but with beautiful symbolism. I would however, change the arrangement. Centering is never nice. =[ I used to do the same thing but was later told that it's not a good thing in most cases. But overall a lovely poem =]

Very lovely poem