All of your pieces are overwhelmingly short. They might be worthwhile if you actually took them and did something with them before posting them. This starts, and then it ends. Poems are no different from prose in that there should always be a beginning a middle and an end. You have none of these. I understand you're humor, but I think you should work more on developing something rather than just spating these short little bits out.
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