No More

No more
crying myself to sleep at night.
No more
hiding in the bathroom at school.
No more
being afraid of mirros
because they show the real me.
No more
doubting myself.
No more
giving up
on myself,
on my future.
The storm has past
and I'm a new person.

I wrote this in the middle of the night so it probably sucks. But any reviews would be appreciated. Be honest!

Some of my best pieces were written in the middle of the night! I overall liked the whole idea, but it could defiantly be better. The poem seems very simple. There is nothing wrong with that. Simplicity is beautiful!

Erynn wrote:No more
crying myself to sleep at night.
No more
hiding in the bathroom at school.
No more
being afraid of mirrors
because they show the real me.
No more
doubting myself.
No more
giving up
on myself, I think you should take this out. You already said 'myself', and it doesn't seem like you're trying to use repetition (Obviously with the exception of 'no more'), so it doesn't flow very well.
on my future.
The storm has passed
and I'm a new person.

I really like it. I can relate to it and it isn't bad at all. Good job!

This was a good piece of writing and don't worry, most writers dislike their work (I know I do) but anywho the middle of the night is when I'm most inspired!! Keep it up