A Poet's Land

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I really liked this. It felt kind of... free and whimsical to me. I'm not going to point out any changes; it seemed like you considered your word choice instead of just throwing some word in to make it rhyme, for the most part. Keep writing like this; it was really interesting

Evening, there.

Just saw this as a recommended for me, and read it.

It was beautiful, and the playful rhyming captured my heart. I like this poem - very much. Esspecially the third stanza,
but I find the last stanza's last line to be quite... Out of place? It sort of - in my very opinion - ruined the passionate voice of the poem, shifting to more distant voice.

The world described in the poem sounds like pure bliss however.

I personally don't find rhyming poems to be up my alley, but it seems that you're an exception. The imagery is very imaginative and dreamy, and the lines fit together very smoothly. There are a few spelling mistakes, but I believe that there's no need to point out and repeat what previous people had pointed out themselves.

Overall, this is one of the most professionally beautifully poetic poems I've read in my entire 13 years. Bravo! (: I wish best of luck to you, and hope that you could continue to write awesomely.

~ItsRainbowInked

This was excellent! After first reading it, your poem kind of reminded me of the song Imagine by John Lennon.
I really liked the lines "To compare to the verses/chisled in our core." I thought that was a very unique way of stating things.