GoodBye

If we can’t get over this
Then it’s not real friendship
That means your words were bullshit
Yeah all what came from your lip

You piece of scumbag
I can’t believe I believed you
You hid that other face real well, fag
Didn’t know you were just like your crew

Well damn it, have it your way
Be a perfect traitor
All I know is that one day you’ll pay
You damned manipulator

I bet you know my pain
I bet you lovin’ your game
Making my heart bleed like the pouring rain
And you don’t even feel no shame

You know I’m sensible
And you enjoy trampling on my feelings
Isn’t that just incredible?
To think I thought you one of the best human beings

Now I know the truth
Now I see your real face
Well you can get lost with all your sooth
See if that makes me lose my pace

I think all that love for ya is turning black
It’s becoming mould cause on you I’m hatin’
Cause kindness you now really lack
You’ve become so cruel, yeah now it’s all showin’

That evil side I never knew
I ‘m givin you credit; you hid it so well
And naïve like I am I believed you
And ignored that loud warning bell

But if you don’t seem to care
Why the hell should I?
I’m just gonna bare
This immense pain; I mean I won’t die

If you can live your life
Why the hell wont I?
I’ll live mine too with no more strife
Relating to you; and this is no lie

You’ll see, I’ll get over you
I mean you ain’t the freaking air I breathe
All you may do
I’ll ignore in a way so lithe



Go on. Continue living.
Not that you ever stopped
But please never ever come back running
To me cause my love for you I would’ve chopped

A small part of me still craves for you
The old you I liked dearly
But with time, I’ll get over you
Continue my life, you will see

Don’t flatter yourself idiot
You no longer play any major role
In my life, you crappy faggot
Yeah my REAL friends are gonna fill that hole

You dug in me
With those harsh words you pronounced
That made me see
That it was final; our animosity had just been announced

A small part of me died today
‘Cause what you said, hurt me deep
So you better just stay away
And never look back you awful creep

You made the choice
To eradicate me forever
I could hear the hatred in your voice
It hurt me like hell but one day I’ll be better

I dunno though
When that day will come
I know that outside I show
A happy face ‘cause my sadness I try to run from

I bet you’re laughing now
Living your life normally
I can’t believe how
You just destroyed that kinship you see

You don’t know how my heart is breaking
You don’t know what effect your attitude has on me
How I can literally feel my heart beating,accelerating
Oh my I just wanna let my tears fall freely

I can’t believe it’s the end
Is that your way of saying goodbye?
Breaking me in a way I won’t mend
For some more time just cry and cry?

So that means that all you said
Those sweet words that you uttered
Were all bullshit which I was fed
Which made my eyes damp and watered

But no. Really I won’t
I won’t let you see me cry
I’ll put up that tough ‘I don’t care’ front
I think that this is my last goodbye



You don’t really care
Wow you really despise me
You are just a mere
Hypocrite I guess which I now see too lately

I didn’t think that would ever happen
I didn’t think you’d burn our friendship
‘cause of a godforsaken
English project; you lousy hip



That just shows what a fake you were
And now you tryin’ to make me jealous
But didn’t I tell you I’ve been there?
You’re just a demonic mean evil wuss

I hope I can forget you
Forget all this now now
All what you’re making me go through
I MUST forget it somehow

You ain’t my life, you ain’t my future
I’m ready to move ahead
‘Cause indifference is the only cure
To my pain; for me you’re DEAD !

So infront of you now, I do this bet
You’ll be forever my past
Never my future ‘cause you I will forget
Yeah and I hope I do so very fast

Nice hostility, I could feel the anger and emotion you placed in this piece ^^ Well good luck and Happy Writing!!
Soulkana<3

Quick comment.
I liked this piece. I could really feel the emotion and anger you felt towards this person. Overall it was amazing! It something that one can relate to and we all have our ways of dealing with the obstacles life throws at us. keep writing:)

I love love love it!! it's so emotional and your words really stung. i really really hope that i'm not the one you're talking to because i would just day from the knives that were your words. good job writing! keep it up!

You wrote a very good poem.

I don't see any grammar mistakes.

It kept me reading so it was very interesting. Keep up the good work. I think anyone could relate and have experienced this or something similar. Great job

Whoa, good job on letting the reader know exactly how you feel. Believe me, I've been there before! And yes, right after the friendship ends, it's when it hurts the MOST. Then it gets better and better. And true friends will definitely fill up the empty hole in your heart you're feeling now. They know how to truly care, listen, and understand. Also, my personal religion really helped me get through it.
I liked this poem a lot. And I agree with the other comments, the words did sting very much. Not so many grammar mistakes though. My suggestion for another poem, if you feel up to it, is how you have come through it, and "recovered." Who has helped you through it, and how they helped you.

Keep it up!