Home by emmaline49

you're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes i find a home.

you're a little boy in the sun when you smile at me
and deep in your eyes i find the truth.

you're a little boy in the water when you cry in front of me
and deep in your body i find myself

you're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes i find a home
i find a home.

you're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes i find a home.

you're a little boy in the sun when you smile at me
and deep in your eyes i find the truth.

you're a little boy in the water when you cry in front of me
and deep in your body i find myself

you're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes i find a home
i find a home.

I want to say nice job emma this was very well done and very creative ^^ I want to say keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon, as I truly enjoy your work. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!!!
Soulkana<3

emmaline49 wrote:You're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes I find a home.

You're a little boy in the sun when you smile at me
and deep in your eyes I find the truth.

You're a little boy in the water when you cry in front of me
and deep in your body I find myself

You're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes I find a home
I find a home.

This is a very inspiring poem! I'm impressed by the content -but less impressed by the lack of capitalization. If you fix that, this poem is golden! Excellent job!

Thanks for the comments! The poem's lack of capitalization is completely intentional, however. Thanks anyway for pointing it out!