Behemoth

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This drawing took me about 5 hours because of the small little details that went into it. Hope you like, and don't be afraid to criticize or comment it. (:

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"I know I can't slow down, I can't hold back
Though you know I wish I could
Oh no, there aint no rest for the wicked
Until we close our eyes for good." ---Cage the Elephant 'Ain't No Rest for the Wicked'




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Five hours only!? Wow, you're skilled... usually that'd take more... It's really cool! I especially love the roots or nerves... what they are... very nice. But I always thought a behemoth was some kind of great beast which resembles a lion, only fiercer, and it has tusks in it's mouth? The shading is amazing. This is like one of those pre-sketches that you can find in MMORPG games for their monsters or something to that effect... really good work! I'd love to see more from you!

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WHOAHH!!!!!! That is so awesome. It's like a giant tree monster. I like the details you did and like mentioned above, the shading is phenomenal.I keep on staring at it while I'm writing is review and trying to figure out if there's more than one mouth and if it's legs are playing mind tricks on me with its twisted roots. Like Roseamanelle said, I'd really like to see more from you too, PM me if you post more pics.
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Will do :)
"I know I can't slow down, I can't hold back
Though you know I wish I could
Oh no, there aint no rest for the wicked
Until we close our eyes for good." ---Cage the Elephant 'Ain't No Rest for the Wicked'




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Wow this is amazing, keep up the great work. Never let your creative talent go to waste man!
Can't wait to see more from you.
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I agree with Rosea, it does look like concept art for a monster in a game or movie. However, in most instances, the final product doesn't turn out even half as good as the initial art.
Anyways, my only critique is that you didn't use a scanner. If your paper was larger than A4, or if you don't have a scanner, then I understand. However, there are many ways to better your setup so even a photo looks good. I can see that you turned a light on it. This, however, made one portion of it very bright, and the rest kinda dark. Next time, get a brighter light centered over the picture, or use the flash on your camera. Flash doesn't work sometimes, though.
Anyways, other than that, I love it! The details seem amazing. You should post more pictures up close, too! :D
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Thank you Jenthura :D And I added some detail and a depth to this drawin if any of you want to check it out
Here's the link:
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Though you know I wish I could
Oh no, there aint no rest for the wicked
Until we close our eyes for good." ---Cage the Elephant 'Ain't No Rest for the Wicked'




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Hello, i reviewed the newer version of this and i have to agree the water color background works better. Nice work!

oh and what paper did you use?
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I used watercoloring paper. It's sort of rough and it's 90lb. Hope that helps :)
"I know I can't slow down, I can't hold back
Though you know I wish I could
Oh no, there aint no rest for the wicked
Until we close our eyes for good." ---Cage the Elephant 'Ain't No Rest for the Wicked'



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