Elizabeth Night is a vampire with a strength in darkness. She is very powerful and well respected. She gets things even without asking for them and she has people that she can't live without. When the neutral darkness she controls decides to walk the path of evil, will she be strong enough to give up everything to save the world? Will she lose a battle for the first time or will she unleash a power that is far more advanced than anything she has ever seen before? Ancient secrets are revealed and old enemies return for revenge. With the help of her mystic circle, Elizabeth must make choices that will change the future. The real question is whether it will change in a good way or a bad one...
When I read this piece of work, to me, it sounded more like a blurb than anything else. Is it a blurb? Or an excerpt from the story you're writing? It really confuses me and I think you should've specified what it was when posting this on YWS so that reviewers will understand easier.
Anyway, as a blurb, this piece of work seemed interesting. It really isn't the sort of story I'd find myself reading because vampires are too common nowadays and I've heard enough about their wild adventures, but I know lots of other people who love that dark concept. Overall, it's an effective blurb, so keep on the writing!
Thien
"I dream my paintings, then I paint my dreams" - Van Gogh
And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains. — Percy Bysshe Shelley
