5 Poems That Start With "S" - Shoes

Shoes
Oh how many different types of shoes there are!
They house your feet and cover your feet.
They can make your feet look sexy or casual.
There are some that are strappy and some that are four stories.
They can even look like a cow’s hoof or be pointy if you like.
And if you don’t like shoes be not afraid,
For even horse’s wear shoes!
So whether your feet are small or big or thin or wide,
There will always be shoes for you.

This is very unique! Just a few things I'd like to point out;

Shoes
Oh how many different types of shoes there are!
They house your feet and cover your feet. [You're basically saying the same thing twice, maybe edit this so it's different, or remove the second part all together, up to you!]
They can make your feet look sexy or casual. [This line seems random, maybe you should expand on it some more?]
There are some that are strappy and some that are four stories (it would sounds better if you inserted 'high' here).
They can even look like a cow’s hoof or be pointy if you like.
And if you don’t like shoes be not afraid,
For even horse’s wear shoes!
So whether your feet are small, big, thin, or wide,
There will always be shoes for you!

I really hope this helps! Remember, I'm not saying you did anything wrong, I'm just saying what I would've done ^.^

Hello there rose. I am here for the review. After looking at your title i thought that it consisted 5 poems which started with "S" but it only has one. Where are the rest? Okay then enough of the title talk lets get to the review.

Shoes
Oh how many different types of shoes there are! The exclamation mark is not needed
They house your feet and cover your feet. The repetition of feet in such short time does not sound good when you are reading and as the previous reviewer said they are more or less the same thing.
They can make your feet look sexy or casual. Sexy or casual? Try rewording this line.
There are some that are strappy and some that are four stories. By four stories did you mean a shoe with high heels? If yes then i must say its a lot of exaggeration.
They can even look like a cow’s hoof or be pointy if you like. From when did cow's hoof shaped shoes come in the market? I want one too.. XD
And if you don’t like shoes be not afraid, be not afraid is not the exact thing you wanted to write i guess. Why would anyone be afraid of shoes?
for even horse’s wear shoes!
So whether your feet are small or big or thin or wide, big or small,thin or wide
there will always be shoes for you.

It was a good attempt but it needs a lot of work to make it better and i hope this would help in improving it. And one more thing, do not capitalize the first word after a comma. Keep writing.

Shoes
Oh how many different types of shoes there are! Comma after the "oh"
They house your feet and cover your feet. The two "your feet" disrupt flow
They can make your feet look sexy or casual. This line just seems thrown in there. Perhaps elaborate or back up this idea
There are some that are strappy and some that are four stories. "Four stories" sounds awkward there
They can even look like a cow’s hoof or be pointy if you like.
And if you don’t like shoes be not afraid, Comma after shoes. "Be not afraid" sounds awkward, change up the words
For even horse’s wear shoes! You don't need the apostrophe after "horse". That means it posessive and that's not the context you're using
So whether your feet are small or big or thin or wide,
There will always be shoes for you.

I liked this poem's idea but the flow was continually being disrupted and it was smooth transitions. Keep writing and revising this, and it will look great!